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I'm guessing it's either Kid because he can be anyone Shinichi wants or it's being left like this so the reader can fill in who they want.

This is really good! Are you gonna write more?

Aren't you going to continue this story? It promises a lot. I'd like to see what happens next

I love it!!! Write more, please!!!

title means what?

woahh how could you stop there??! XD not fair at all....


sa let\'s see.. I like it even if it\'s a bit ooc
a bit early to say more but i like your style so please go on ^^V

Togale

A good start. You should add more chapters to this. You might wanna get a beta too.

This is sooooo good, please continue! Now why are you still reading this? Go on, chop chop! Hurry up and write more!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

Is it some random boy that Shinichi used to know or somethin\'? Or is it Kuroba? I mean... the \"I went to your school\" line kinda threw me off \'cause I thought it was Hattori at first, but then Hattori has this weird speech(And he lives all the way in Osaka), so Shinichi is bound to notice, but since you\'re the author and you probably don\'t wanna give it away you could\'ve left out some hints and stuff. But it\'s nice to see a yaoi fic on AFF cause everything here is mostly just mindless hetero sex with dubbed names which I cringe at (...the fuck is \'JIMMY?\') and so I really liked this and would like it if you updated... like... fast.... because I wanna see who this \"mystery boy\" is. :DD

Can\'t wait~

Kaito.Kaito.Kaito! It has to be Kaito~! Oh yeah, your story is very awesome, could use some work though. For once you could seperate the words from the actions and make paragraphs, and maybe add in a bit more grammar, but overall fine. Anyway I think you should really make the second chapter and make it Kaito. That\'d be very awesome. I\'ll keep looking for the update, do not keep your fans waiting! *pumps fists into the air*KAITO/SHINICHI FOREVER! ^______________________^