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for HOTTER DAY

by BACIKY

person peachpit
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just....wtf....O_o
person Evermist
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. That was rather...fast. I must ask a request of you, however. Please don\'t use 4Kids names. I scream at my television every Saturday because I hate these names. If you don\'t know their original names, I understand. But please, in future Mew Mew stories, Zoe is Ichigo, Corina is Mint, Bridget is Lettuce, Kiki Pudding, and Renae Zakura. Please, I just get very annoyed with these names.
person mew mew freak
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man this story sucked. Its spelled Renee
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good for ur first tery...^_~
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fff
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that sucked. It wasn\'t even a fucking story.
person Mikai
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...yeah. Next time you write a fanfic, try to elaborate on the events instead of writing them down so bluntly. Keep writing, you\'ll improve!
person Bitchpants
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah... That wasn\'t even a story, just random sentences placed together to form some sort of Frankenstein-like paragraph. By the way real lesbians (take note on how I spelled that) don\'t just jump in bed together because they\'re both women, that\'s stupid.
person Fekker
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mrs. Peanut: Can you believe how crappy this was?

Mr. Fekker: No my good buddy I cannot. Feels like I was reading a passage from hooked on phonix.

Mrs. Peanut: Awww it wasn\'t that bad...

Mr. Fekker: are you (bleeping) kidding me!? After reading this, I had to go so bad!

Mrs. peanut: yeh your right....

Mr. Fekker:I can right a better story out of the sperm from my penis, spell better too...

Mrs. Peanut: heh heh, he spelled lesbian wrong. Heh heh heh...
person Mrs. Peanut
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fekker: *write*

Mrs. Peanut: well that was embarrassing.

Fekker: Shut it, bitch.



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