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person tsutsuji
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a review for the first chapter, I haven't read the rest yet, I plan to savor it slowly later when I have more time. So far, I love the dialogue and the action, and all that they don't say. I especially like the same things your other reviewers like about it - the reasons they can't say how they feel, and the bit with Gojyo at the beginning, plus the *wonderful* physical descriptions of Sanzo! What else can I say - I love it so much already that I finally had to figure out how to use the new "Recommended Reading" feature here. I'll be back for more!
person nimblnymph
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so normally, I'm not about this stuff. But this was AMAZINGLY good! Wonderful job of keeping them in character...and exquisitely hot! This was actually one of the first fics I've read here, and I'm glad for that! HURRAY for sexiness!
person simple fan
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fabulous amazing... I applaud you. *bows*
person C4PyroGirl
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blushes jaw drops and is reduced to incoherent mumbling* Wow...uh this was so hot! Eh, I think my brain just died...
person chizuko
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww strokes the kitty\'s ego \" who\'s a good lemon writer? who\'s a good lemon writer? You are you are!\" lol ro really that was a good fic lemon sceen was awesome. The Gojyo thing at the beging was halarious that is so him to be like so.. who\'s on top?
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
utterly sweet and amazing. i luff it. great job in keeping everyone in character too.
person C4PyroGirl
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BROWNIES!! God I love, uke!Sanzo is my passion, too. ^^v Very nice... ^^v
person Jamie
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grins stupidly, rather surprised Sanzo could still walk after that, then wonders how Sanzo is going to be able to sit in Hakuryuu all day long* Lol!
person gaelan
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word: GREAT, AMAZING, WOW, YUM... uhmm, ok, that\'s four. Never mind, all of the above. and continue writing please, it\'s so hard to find HakkaixSanzo fics, its usually the other way around, which is ok as well, except that, well... i guess i prefer Sanzo as uke (hehehe.) thanks, and please continue writing.
person shikari
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was auwsome!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was happy to see it continued. i love this story. it shows Hakkai\'s more vulnerable side. and that Sanzo can be human . keep up the good work i look forward to reading more of your fics.

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