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by vampunk

person Moonwing
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extraordinary!!!! Well written and everyone stayed in character! Love it!!!
person NeoBritt
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hawt lemon, combined with such a cute ending! ^_^ Your descriptions are really awesome, too. Great story!
person Isabeau
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I liked lap dance as well, but this is by far the better story. I like how you kept Sanzo and Hakkai in character, yet made their feelings for each other believable. Great Lemon, too. Please consider making this into a series. I think you could do great things with this as an ongoing story.
person Turin
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yours. n_n
person Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job with this. I like how Hakkai was oh-so-confident during the activities, but before and after he was the reserved man we all know and love. I keep telling people there is a paramour in that green gaze just itching to come err cum a-hem out.

There aren’t nearly enough 3/8/3 fics. Good job with this one. It was entertaining. The conversation with Gojyo was funny and the lemon was hot.

Thanks for putting it up.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
person Iron Dog
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
From one review whore to another...This was great. I like seing Sanzo get a little come-upance (doesn\'t matter greatly from who). I think you did a good job capturing the characters. Very nice little PWP. Thanks.
person C4PyroGirl
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice...*drools* very nice...I would absolutely love it, if you wrote more... uke!Sanzo is so delicious...and I love HakkaiSanzo and GojyoSanzo...^^v

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