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Omg, I can not wait for an update!!
I just started reading this fiction last week and I'm hooked! I love it, please keep going!
I also can't wait to see what becomes of Kyo~

evilchild, you are really evil leaving us without an update for so long. please update soon

I love this fan fic. I keep coming back to read it over and over. I would love to see a update. Sp, please when you have the time please update.

why did you stop it there? please update this story! i want to see kyo get pregnant & all the other things you're going to do to him.

This is a very hot story.
I can't wait for the next chapter :)

...you meanie, only puting up a great teaser *pouts* i really liked the WS part, never seem anything like that before... ^_^ i think ya should tease poeple with the HoruxYuki part, like having the other ppl hear it and the noise they make, but dont acctlry(sp????? T.T) write that scene... but thats only an idea that my sick pervy mind came up with

I have to be completely honest, when I first read that it contained watersports, I had to step away from the computer for a good half hour considering if I'd be able to read this. I did, and it wasn't bad, not my bag really, but I could understand the effect of hormones and sensation(urine -is- awfuly warm) and it does carry a fountain of information within its pheromones regarding the genetics of the creature it came from. It was well done, truly, but I didn't get quite the intense overwhelming heat of the shared ShigureKyo scenes that I so love, but that may be in part credible to it being solo masturbation combined with my residual concernation regarding the use of such bodily fluids. I doubt such a, for lack of a better term, kink will become a staple of your writing, or even vaguely common place, but I have to ask of you one thing: no scat....please. If you were to use such, I think I'd have to disconnect my internet(for all of five minutes x_x) and cry, because I really do love both this story and your writing. I mean, at least urine's sterile when it first leaves the body!

So happy to see it all within the works, and I hope I haven't seemed narrow mindedly critical and upset you. I truly do love your story, it's simply that such tendacies aren't to my taste, though I will say you went about it very well and I enjoyed the scene, even within the content; I'm simply trying to give you candid, sincere reviews about my thoughts on the story, and if I come across as an ogre, please tell me so that I can apologize and try to convey my thoughts and opinions more clearly.

Shigure's slow blinking confusion made me smile, and Kyo's changes are making me curious. I know I asked this before, but humor me, Kyo's not becoming a girl, is he, or else he'd have begun becoming on by now, and given everyone a REALLY big surprise. It's simply the shift in his hormones and a certain curse, am I correct?

Still adoring and eagerly hoping for updates(mooch that I am).
Nacht

Loved it. I relle enjoyed thr WS. Never knew I liked reading that kind of stuff...anyhow, good job. Update as soon as u can please!

Oh! and for the HxY lemon, go ahead and write it. It'll be a nice addition...

OMG! This is so good and I can't wait for you to update! So PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

There is not enough Shigure/Kyo stories out there so I was thrilled when I found yours. PLEASE UPDATE!!!

its true, i am a slow reader! lol but yea i was looking at the hits thing and i was trying to figure out how that worked... *i forgoT!* eep! so i clicked on ur story and the number went up and i was just like : oops. because ive probably read this like a 1000 times. *compliments to you!* but yea so sorry about that.....
but yea you should keep updating! and i love how you put in the 'teasers' it lets us know ur still writting and not like dissappearing for a year. thats scary!
so def. update soon! (please!) :3