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by evilchild

person Niiro _Yuuyake
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...Kyou can really PMS. Is it called PMSing for him, since he's technically not a girl? I heard some guys can PMS too...

And oh my goodness! Kyou's getting boobs!(I hope I didn't spoil that for anyone) Boobs! Anyhow, I just love this pairing! Kyou and 'Gure. So cute.

P.S. I love Angel!

Update soon!
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I LOVE your story! It's one of my favorites, and I love the Kyo/Shigure pairing. You've been writing this thing for over a year, and you've still got people hooked! That's got to be awesome for you, keep up the good work!
person LadyOFTheFallenTrees
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its so original, most of the others are starting to smear together but yours stands out, I LOVE IT!!! pleas write more pleas pleas pleas!!
person C4PyroGirl
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading your story the whole way through. It's awesome. And I can't wait for more. ^^
person Layla
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! This is a nice story, I love the both the plotline and the pairing. Kyou's random bi-polar antics definately throw me off track though, and Kyou making fun of Yuki. If Kyou was going to have fun molesting anyone, I would have thought it would be Ritchan-san, because he's such a spaz as it is. But that's just my opinion and whatnot. I can't wait to see where this plot is going, so update soon! ^_^
person Layla
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I forgot to add how much I love the idea of Kyou helping take care of those new kittens! ^_^ One of them should be named Momo(peach)! Tee hee.
person Nacht Kind
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I’m back~! (I got a new e-mail recently[recently being relative: could mean days, could mean months], and I’m not sure if it’s the one I used for my last review, but there it is ^_^)

::rolls around in fiction:: Oh, I love this story so~. I screamed a little when I read your author’s note at the top of the chapter, I hadn’t been sure if you thought my comments to be amusing, having merit, or the product of a creepy fangirl(not entirely untrue).

Poor Kyo needs hormonal balance pills, he’s moody, the sweet dear. I loved his random molestation of anyone in close vicinity, and the fact that Shigure took it in stride and was just pensive about degree of effect heat seemed to have on Kyo. I believe that was mainly because, one: heat can create rather strong behavioral impulses, two: Kyo is never truly serious about his randomly invading other’s personal bubble and is usually doing it just to fluster them, and three: the people involved(being molested) never come on to Kyo in a truly aggressive manner, even Yuki had an amount of awareness to him and wasn’t acting with the same level of intent that would appear in someone set upon that course of action(having sex with Kyo). Now, if the first two of these conditions were to be breached, I think Shigure would be not well pleased and hurt that Kyo would do that, and that if the third one were to occur, Lord help us and the poor bastard dumb enough to do it, all hell would break loose. Though, if after his heat, Kyo was to invade Yuki’s personal space, not engaging in any form of actual sexual contact outside of lips nearly or barely brushing over an ear and slight body touching to tease, just to make him flustered, I think Shigure would be amused.

I laughed at the mention of taxi shenanigans, cause it’s basically true. You can get more porn than on PayPerView if you get caught in the right section of a New York traffic jam. And can I say that, had I been the one driving, they would have so gotten into an accident, because I’d have been watching that review mirror like a hawk trained on a rabbit. Also, Kyo’s kiss analysis managed to pull a giggle from my already grinning mouth.

Sexual scenes were, as per usual, delicious; I was pleased with the amount of sexual gratification you portrayed simply through masturbation.

The news about your review submissions made me so sad; I hate it when people refused to say anything, especially when they’re regularly reading a story and the author’s work isn’t getting enough recognition from many of the other viewers. I loved it when I began, and I still do, so I’ll try my damnedest to keep reading and reviewing as you continue. I actually first read your work in the Teen Titans archive, and when I realized this was you I was so happy. I enjoy the SladexRobin one very much, too, but this one’s my favorite, hands down. I hope I might be able to be included on that chosen e-mail list too? Should it happen, that is.

Lord, my reviews take eons; it must seem like an excessive rainfall of babble to you, huh? If that’s the case, just tell me, and I’ll try to keep my raving to limited sentenced degree.

You keep spraying, but I’m still here and eager for more,
Nacht
person Nacht Kind
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I feel like an utter moron. -__-;

I just realized that, after submitting my brought-on-in-fits-of-joy-and-worship review of lengthy rambling, I failed to anwser your question. Kneading is when a cat presses down with one front paw, then the other, with alternating degrees of pressure as the paws shift. Sometimes rasps of claws will join in, but it's not usually painful, and can even be pleasent. It's an unconcious gesture that they do when relaxed and pleased, and even humans will do it when in a pleasing situation(i.e. having sex and they begin kneading their partners back, chest, or the covers as the positions and hand placement vary, or post coital while in afterglow, or simply when feeling particularly relaxed and intimate).

I apologize for not answering it in my original statement.
Nacht
person lilly
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL they havent had sex yet.....
please update soon!
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!

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