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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Yeah! Go Conrad. You haven't updated in a while but I forgive you. Conrad-Yuuri forever, baby!
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An update would be nice! I love Conrad, I haven\'t gotten to finish the show, but so far so good.
On technical stuff... Sometimes the decriptions are a bit weird, instead of saying, \"the green-eyed blond boy\' or whatever, really, you can use Wolfram. We\'re not gonna get mad. The chapters feel a little short, but I\'m used to much more involved (EIGHT MAIN ^#%@ING CHARACTERS!!!!) story, your\'s doesn\'t need as much time developing the characters. The internal conflict you have going on in each is nice, but you might want to change it up a bit, instead of constant lamenting or anger (since getting the same thing over and over and over gets boring...) you could try dishonoring, blowing up, dismissing, fear, hardening, longing for, relenting, plead, shame, support, undulate... ok, yes, these are all shades the of the four basic emotions (Fear, Love, Anger, Grief --FLAG in theater theory), but I just don\'t want you to get stuck in a rut describing what the characters feel. These are actions, but they directly correlate to emotions, so, have fun.
And dude, update! I love Conrad/Yuuri. <-------- is probably the ONLY other Conrad fan out there
On technical stuff... Sometimes the decriptions are a bit weird, instead of saying, \"the green-eyed blond boy\' or whatever, really, you can use Wolfram. We\'re not gonna get mad. The chapters feel a little short, but I\'m used to much more involved (EIGHT MAIN ^#%@ING CHARACTERS!!!!) story, your\'s doesn\'t need as much time developing the characters. The internal conflict you have going on in each is nice, but you might want to change it up a bit, instead of constant lamenting or anger (since getting the same thing over and over and over gets boring...) you could try dishonoring, blowing up, dismissing, fear, hardening, longing for, relenting, plead, shame, support, undulate... ok, yes, these are all shades the of the four basic emotions (Fear, Love, Anger, Grief --FLAG in theater theory), but I just don\'t want you to get stuck in a rut describing what the characters feel. These are actions, but they directly correlate to emotions, so, have fun.
And dude, update! I love Conrad/Yuuri. <-------- is probably the ONLY other Conrad fan out there
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Conrad and Yuuri story! I really like the way you're setting this up, particularly the way you're taking your time with everything. The character interactions are really true to the show and I'd love to see where you're taking this. I like the way you're writing Wolfram - conflicted, prickly, and struggling to understand who Konrad is in relation to himself and to Yuuri. Anyway, I hope you haven't given up on it (despite the fact that some reviewers seem to be pretty rude about the pairing, which I personally wish we saw more of). Take care and thanks for posting.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this was actually written very well...Although...I really have to wait to see episode 40...but my parents keep turning off the darn laptop so I can never finish my downloads...>.<;; But, my guesses is that I\'ll come to this fanfic again and read it. XD;; I\'m one of the few who like Konrad/Yuuri more than Yuuri/Wolfram.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good for a Conrad/Yuuri pairing. Admittedly I prefer Yuuram over Conrad/Yuuri but still the flow of the story was enjoyable. I heartily press you to go onward~ XD
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like this fic. It\'s well written and the plot seems to be coming along well. Can\'t wait to see the next installment. Oh and PINKS WHY ARE YOU READING THIS FIC IF YOU \"HATE\" Conrad/Yuuri??????????? Sorry I just had to know >_<.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EWWW i HATE CONRAD/YUURI
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story so far. i loves it. loves it loves it loves it. ^__^ you\'re characterization is really good. and even though its going to be a Yuuri/Konrad fic i really like the time you\'re putting into telling about Wolfram\'s dillema. I love the three brothers and their relationships to each other. hope you update soon. ^_^ feel free to gimme an email, otherwise i\'ll check every now and then. rock on!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Great story!!! Really enjoyed though since I haven\'t watched up to episode forty was major spoiler. By the way do you know where I can get the entire series on dvd!!!
Thanks!!!!!
Great story!!! Really enjoyed though since I haven\'t watched up to episode forty was major spoiler. By the way do you know where I can get the entire series on dvd!!!
Thanks!!!!!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love this! ^___^ I always thought Konrad and Yuuri just made a better couple. Even when I first read the preview of the series, I thought the noble looking brunette man was Yuuri\'s unfortunate fiance. ^^\' Oh well, please update this real soon, ok?