rate_review Reviews

Oh wow........hurry up and put another chappie up already...gosh darnit. I want to know what happens! I thought Kunzite had been killed. Oh well...poor Zoycite. And what is up with Ami's dreams?

Hey ^.^ i like the story so far, i can't wait to get more of them read and everything >.> I wait eagerly

Ooh, Vampire Ami, coooool! Couple of things, though. One, your grammar needs a little work, and I noticed a couple of times you accidentally used the wrong word(ex.: where, instead of were). Two, a really major error - Zoicite wasn\'t the one to be frozen in Eternal Sleep, Jadeite was. Zoicite was simply killed dead by Beryl for trying to kill Mamoru/Endymion. Laters!