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for Crystal Flaws - Part 02 Crystal Fears

by LunaHope

person DEEP SERENITY
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it all ended, well, Elios, needs to get a back bone LOL

good job
person Scorpinac
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darien\'s boy by Beryl, huh? One might ask just exactly when this conception session happened in regards to the established timeline, but I\'ll refrain. As to who ordered him offworld, well, the primary suspects would be Endymion, Neo-Serenity, Mars, possibly Uranus or one of the (elder)cats. Or is there someone else involved here not yet introduced? Oh, well, eagerly awaiting Book 3(and possibly a ratings boost). laters!
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 4-was sweet love the whole dating thing and can\'t believe I\'m saying it, but love RINI LOL

chap 5-hmmm everyone cried to much for my taste, but liked the action and can\'t wait to find out what the two guys secrets are, and this whole loss of power thing...wait he the solider somehow a son of Dariens????????????
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLll if so that\'s great
person Scorpinac
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that monster was a pain in the neck. And next time, the long awaited revelation! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear, someone just jumped to a really *bad* conclusion! This is going to get bumpy... As for Lita, yeah, I can see her hesitating to send wine. (\"You gave my daughter WHAT?!?!?!\") Well, send the next update soon! Laters!
person deep serenity
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chap 3!, LOL, it had me laughing and wow can\'t wait to see this courtship and find out who he is, really great stuff!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice development, nice to see Rini and her group getting to win. But shouldn\'t the other Senshi have offspring by now? Admittedly this would prove mildly difficult for Haruka and Michiru... By the way, when you say \"the Mines of Planet Uranus\", do you mean like the city of Bespin in \"Empire Strikes Back\"? Cause that\'s the only way you *could* mine Uranus...or Jupiter, or Saturn, or Neptune. Repeat after me: gas....giants. No....surface. Clear? Good! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has Nephrite been reincarnated? The good Corprol\'s appearance does seem comparable. And Rini all restless and rebelious. (Deep sarcasm)I don\'t know *any* teenagers like that. Hehheh, it\'ll be interesting to see how this chunk develops. Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And to Deep Serenity, yes, in the Manga version of SuperS, after the Quartet are healed they become the \"Asteroid\" Senshi(considering that Takeuchi-San *did* name after the four largest rocks in the belt.). It\'s canon! If you\'re following the Manga, anyway...
person Deep serenity
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 2- well written and it\'s nice to see, that rini learned teamwork and how she finally bonded with her scouts! Very nice job

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