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for The Posession Series 1: Break In

by Alyndrya

person Chrono
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_> I\'m sorry, I just want to know why there isn\'t an OOC warning on this fic? Because that\'s exactly how you have Kenshin acting. Hitokiri Battousai was not some crazed mad man who killed for the fun of it. Hell, if that were the case, he\'d be no different from Jin-e. Yes, Battousai killed countless people, but he didn\'t do it for fun, he did it because he believed that it would create a better country. For god\'s sake, the man witnessed bandits slaughter three women who had more or less adopted him as their little brother before he even hit puberty. He didn\'t see death as something funny or enjoyable. He comitted his murders without any emotion what so ever.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve already seen the possession 2, or else I\'d be out for your blood at that \'ending\'!!!!
person shoryt
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That lemon was so great because it wasn\'t like any other lemon i\'ve read. i mean cause usually they just talk mainly about sex and who wants that all the time except some psycotic pervert. it was the best lemon i\'ve ever read and i think that you should continue writing. oh my god that lemon was so good i just can\'t get over it. i love humor. oh and please keep writing
person De Lazy Lime
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually read this a long time ago...a really long time ago BUt this gives me hope that you will finish it ne?

Its awesome and the tension even gets to me ^_^
person catti-dono
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could read this chapter over and over again...I love these series and Im soooo glad that you brought them out of the attic, dusted them off, and finishing them...You know me....I just cannot stand unfinished work....laughs....catti
person anubis
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurray!!! you posted it here, I read it long ago, really whao! gosh how I love the tension between those two. Come on people read the story, it\'s great, read MINE too it\'s even better. You rule!!
person Battousai-Lover
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!
just LOVE ur story!! XD
acutally,, ive read this story (whole) before... but now ur starting over!! YAY~
but now i cant remember where i read this story... so can u plz tell me where the whole story is located in??
I REALLy wanna read it again... :)
so plz tell me,, and UPDATE SOON~

p.s. i\'ve also read the sequal to this,, but it wasnt finished......T-T
plz finish the sequal too (and tell me where it\'ll be located...the whole one!! not the slowly updated one plz!!)

THANKS~
BUBYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person RedHedLvr
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you write Battousai (and Alucard). So dark and edgy and EEvil! I want one of my very own! hee he.

Great job and thanks for the tip on you website. Great stories there as well.
person crystal_moon13
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I am first to review! Ahem..anyway, I loved this chapter! It was really written, you were able to draw me into the story like a good author should and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
person girl from ipanema
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that you will be finishing \"Mine\" soon? I\'ll believe it when I see it. God speed.

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