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for Double Take

by dragonphire99

person catti-dono
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has a makings for an awesome story...hope you take it off of hiatus and finish it....catti
person Saigh
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is...wow. Hard for me to read for a start. I hate seeing Dee and Ryo with broken trust, the hardest part is the fact I know what's going on and I wanna scream at Ryo telling him what's going on. Hope it's continued soon! and your other stories as well. Please just say there will be no rape or character deaths. I can't read those
person Crimson
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo
la li ho!!

hey LadyDragonphire! it\'s me....!

the story\'s heating up...! update already! lol i wanna see what\'s coming up next... so yeah!!

take care

Crimson
person bgs
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wrGGGGGGGGGGGGWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWCCCCCCCCCCCCN NNNNNNNNNNN
person firgodes7
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. I like how you are trying something new writing wise. Must say you are doing a pretty good job so far. I am looking forward to seeing what the next chapters will be like.
person Mihoshi
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
I think I know what is going to happen.
Somehow, Dee is going to get kidnapped, and taht guy is going to take over as the new Dee.
But there is still one flaw (hopefully) in the plan; the necklace that Ryo gave him!
If the guy forgets to take it, Ryo will get even more suspicious, the things will really start to heat up
*SREAM, SQUEEL, SHRIEK WITH HYSTERIA*
THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE SO AWSOME!!!!
person #1 pussy fuck
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story got me so wet it was Niagra Falls in my pants!!!!!!
person Booze Hound
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did a double take once...i was walking and saw this oddly proportioned man...striking brown mullet, beer belly from too much jack daniels, and a really fanciful hard on...then i realized i was just looking in the mirror. Gosh do i love myself! And i love these 2 hot guys also. Next to me, these 2 hunks are it. Keep up the great writing ladydragon. I am still waiting for us to cyber.
person Jollyolly
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryo suspicious..Dee bewildered...the plot thickens. Great chapter! Keep writing! ^^
person Jollyolly
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Ryo and Dee\'s happy home will be torn asunder!? Okay, have an uneasy feeling this David person is one sick individual...that makes your story all the more addictive a read! ^^ Please keep up the excellent work that you do...will be looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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