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by dragonphire99

person shikari
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no!!!!!!!! i see bad things in ryo and dee\'s future. i love this story write more soon pleassse
person Blueclarity
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can\'t wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
-Kenz
person Blueclarity
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can\'t wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
-Kenz
person Blueclarity
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Another awesome fanfic! This is so hot! The sex scenes are great, but the dialogue is too! I can\'t wait until you put up chapter three. Good luck and keep writing!
-Kenz
person Crimson
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo
la li ho!!

it\'s me na no da!!! i like the plot already!!!

keep up the good work na no da!!!

Crimson
person tomahomelover35
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...this was so much fun to read...the big words were an added touch that expanded the confines of my vocabulary. A grammer lesson and a hot story all in one! How could you go wrong?
person Booze Hound
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even my one night stand with a Portugese man-whore can\'t compare to the pleasure that Dee and Ryo give each other. When i lay in bed at night, stroking my long, erect penis, i often think of that night of quick passion i had with Guerrmo, he only made me have 2 squirts of cum, but, boy that Dee can make Ryo have 5 squirts. i am so god damn jealous...keep up the good work dragonphire, maybe we can meet sometime online and cyber.
person cum hungry
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!! What a hot story. I just got off from reading it. Man, Ryo is lucky....why can\'t i find a man like that? I mean after all i am a male seeking another male and i just want to find what Dee and Ryo have. You are a great writer dragonphire, keep up the excellent work. I bet you are sexy too! (I do swing both ways!!) I have to go now and clean all this cum off my keyboard.
person mizu
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to pack a punch in the first chapter! Keep it comin\'! ^_-

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