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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First time reviewing a story! I love how you set the story at a boarding school...You\'ve written the characters very well and the story just flows wonderfully! The love scenes are heart-thumping and sweet!^^ Can\'t wait for the next chapters so keep \'em coming!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story! It makes my day when I check in to find something new posted. Keep up the great work!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a quick update. I cant wait to see how you will take the following chapters to the next level. Now with Aarons emotions are coming to surface. Keep up the excellant work. Godd luck with finals !!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eep! I really hope Dee doesn\'t freeze up or push him away...that would really suck.
Oh! A couple things tho...did they really say \'Hold up\' back in the fifties? (in reference to the Head Master in Ch. 1)
And, Dee called The Headmaster a masochist...I believe the correct term for one who enjoys inflicting pain on others is a sadist. A masochist enjoys having pain inflicted upon themselves.
Oh! A couple things tho...did they really say \'Hold up\' back in the fifties? (in reference to the Head Master in Ch. 1)
And, Dee called The Headmaster a masochist...I believe the correct term for one who enjoys inflicting pain on others is a sadist. A masochist enjoys having pain inflicted upon themselves.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh happyberry! you are one of my favorites ^^
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh finals are nasty! good luck. this si going to good! good luck on this too!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dee and Ryo are so hot...they cant be real! THEY\'RE FAKE!!!!!!!! IfI were to change one thing about the story, it would be more SEX.. Just alittle more. Im not talking about paragraphs just like a sentence that says they had sex for 5 minutes or something andt hat they got all disshoveled. Ki think it would add more life to the story and besides it was great writting.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter touched me....no not my heart, my cock. As Dee is comforting Ryo, i felt a quiver \"down there\". Excellent writing! Keep up the good work. Looking forward to a hot sex scene in the next chapter. God, why does anal penetration have to feel so god damn good...excuse me I must go pleasure myself now.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm, regal begal is on drugs. that review made no sense. i want to see some hardcore fucking between Ryo and Dee... they are so gorgeous together. Good luck with the writing and hope to see HOT steamy scenes like you always put in your awesome stories. That scene was so sweet with Dee comforting Ryo... God they are made for each other.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I love all of the stories I\'ve read by you. I\'ll read more and review those too! Please update soon, I\'m on the edge of my seat!