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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You have a few errors here and there, but this is otherwise a well written story (it definitely gave me a good laugh when the hunted pervert finally showed up). One could easily forget Yuya's method of capturing Kyoshiro in the beginning of the manga (haven't watched the anime) and her talent with ropes. It's refreshing to see a work that doesn't portray her as the useless kidnapping victim she's shaping out to be in the manga from what I've read so far. Good work on the citrus too. Well done overall!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice!! Gotta love this story!! Man I think you do characterization really well and your use of humor is awesome! Keep it up!! (I know, cliche, but hey, it works, doesn't it? LOL!)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol!! love the story! It's Super Special Awesome!! Please update!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked you're stories eventhough its been a long time i hope you will finish
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You really know how to write hun!!! Please may I have the honor to encourage you to continue to write. You do such a great job at catching the characters personalities and the detail in "actions" is top notch. XD
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I really like your story.....yuya/kyo forever!!! When are you gonna post the last chappie.....i hope to see this story complete!!! update soon ^-^
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very awesome. Definitely one of the best SDK fics out there. I do love it when Kyo actually acts in character in fics, and you pulled it off well. :) I'm hoping for more!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's how you leave us? AAAWWW! I wanted to see Kyo kick some ass! Damn. Oh, well, I guess I'll just have to wait. update soon!
~::Fire*Aura::~
~::Fire*Aura::~
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story...plz continue.....soon!
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it sounds very good so far. The Kyo and Yuya pairing is really good in it. Keep it up.