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*fans self* things are definitely heating up! do let me know when the next chap is up!

I enjoy reading this story. I can't wait to read more.

This is a great Fan Fiction! I love the way you've made the personalities more blended and less distinct, like his desire for Kaoru is really causing him to lose control. You left it on such a cliffhanger though!! It would be brilliant if you could come back and finish it!!

This was SUUUCH a good story!!! PLEASE DON'T LET IT DIE!!!! UPDATE!!!

Oh, I wish I had known about your adultfanfiction account, since your ff.net account only has 4 chapters up for this fic! This seventh chapter was really good, I love how Kaoru has thought of a way to draw him out and showing him he *is* worthy of her love. Hope you continue this! :D

i've read this story twice now and i think it just got better and i can't wait any longer!
i've been waiting for your next update... Still, there's no chapter eight.
Plus, you haven't even told us about the news on Possession Series 3: Tempting Battousai.
Please hurry and update, my skin's crawling with excitement! i can't wait for the next chappie!
You've done such a wonderful job! What IS a great lemon without a great tease game? >:)
i wish you luck with your health. And please do take better care of yourself cause you're my favorite RK author!

I've lost count of how many times I've read this story...loving it each and every time, I might add!...along with it's companion piece, "Break In". It's sad, though, that "Mine" hasn't been completed, or updated for so long, but I do understand how these things go. It's so easy to lose interest in something though previously having felt a burning passion for it. (Been there, done that!)

I remember a few years ago when I was a novice fanfic writer (well, I was attempting to be one at least ^_~) and stumbled across one of your mailing lists...at that time, I focused exclusively on the "Rurouni Kenshin" fandom...and read several of your fics. I have to admit...I was in awe! I found your style to be simply rivetting and highly entertaining. Things happened and I eventually pulled away from the world of fanfiction for a little while, leaving several stories unfinished in the process. T_T But, though I stopped writing under that particular name, I continued to return to reading your fics frequently...just 'cause there were so AWESOME!

I'm hoping that someday, eventually, you may find the inspiration to finish "Mine". If you do, I know there will be many readers out there eternally grateful! (And not just myself, either!)

Well, take care and keep writing. The world of fanfiction needs talent authors like you. =^_^=

Damn you!
Normally cliff hangers don't hit me too badly, but this one had me saying, allowed, "Damn you". In italics.

It must have been hard to stop writing at that spot!

Just for the record, I love your story, I love the Kenshin/Rurouni/Battousai portrayal, I love the delicious tension between Kenshin and Kaoru, I love Kaoru's idea about fighting Battousai... But I hate not knowing what will happen next! Dang, usually I'm better at being a "good" reviewer, the kind that gives constructive criticism and doesn't just sit there begging for updates. But for some reason I keep getting back to the unfinished-ness. See what you've reduced me to?!? I think I shall cry...

You even made me use the wrong allowed/aloud! Now I really shall cry...

And just for sake of desire to annoy brought on by cliff-hanger insanity:

UUUUPPDAAAAATTEE!!!

*rubs ears* You made me hurt me 'net ears. I hope you're proud of yourself. And I'm not sorry for reviewing the same chapter twice.

I love this story so much XD but when shall it be updated for christ sakes!