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person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I finally had time to finish it! ^^ I really liked this -- excellent idea, as I mentioned before -- and all of the stories were well written. Of the \"second half\" of the \"fic\" (as I already mentioned my favorites for the first 6 \"chapters\" in an earlier review) I enjoyed \'Encounter\' and \'Taste\' the most, and \'Sketch\' as well (although that one was a bit too malancholy for me at the time I read it...). ^^ But again, quite well done, and I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop this series. Keep up the good work!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to go back to real life now... *pouts* ...but I thought I\'d take a moment first and review, even if I have only read 6 of the 11 ficlets you have posted here. ^^ First off, I absolutely love this idea. Why let \"sub-plots\" and the like go to waste when you can just make a collection of ficlets? *nods emphatically* Yup, yup, very smart idea, indeed. ^___~ Now then, on to the next (a.k.a. real ^^ ) reason why I\'m reviewing: \'Anniversary\' was AMAZING!!! ^^ Absolutely exquisite, let me tell you! And not just because of the *cough* content, either. ^___~ I loved the emotions present there, and there was a bit of.....well, not humor per se, but something close. On that note, I also really enjoyed the first six ficlets, too -- very different subject wise, for the most part, but all very poignant to the \"actual story line\". I think it was excellent that you chose to include \'Acceptance\" (?) as well; the parents are secondary characters(duh...), but they definetly help with the feel/development of the story, etc, so I was glad that you added their initial thoughts about Daisuke\'s and Satoshi\'s relationship. Again, very well done!!! ^___^ Well, as I said before, it\'s back to the \"real world\" for now...... keep up the good work!!!
person seraphinadw
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'ve always enjoyed your DN Angel fics, and this bit of \'drabble\' is no exception. I like the ficlets since they offer the reader a view into fleeting and sometimes private moments b/w characters which is all in all very nice. Keep writing!
person kitty
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I must admit that I have read all of your stories and I find them totally amazing... but I will admit when I read Ch. 10, for some reason I was really moved... maybe it was the fact that I was listening to \"CRYING SKY\" by Echizen Ryoma... hmm... but yes... very lovely... your stories are, as always, touching, well-written and very in-depth.
person arrghigiveup
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Found one error: \"Just like Satoshi had never layed\" It should be \'laid\'

Other than that, it\'s more than fine. Incredibly bittersweet, and almost makes me want to cry.
person anonimoose
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...why didn\'t krad say love you back? ;_; i wanna know what happens/ed!!! >< update sooooooooooon
person sei
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written ficlets! I absolutely adore all of them! Makes me go all sparkly. ^^ Hope to read more of these. ^^
person anonimoose
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woots you updated again :D Wow...i had always thought of emiko as a yaoi-fangirl sort...but i guess i was wrong XD
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol excellent, I have a question. How come no one ever writes on when Daisuke grew red wings in the last ep? IS it like forbidden or something? Lol. Anyways, I am really liking your work, please keep it up!
person anonimoose
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! another sequel XD i love this series X3 hope you update again soon! wonder that those documents were... XD

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