rate_review Reviews

I realise that this story was meant to be an AU, but even so, it was pretty seriously out of character all around. I just can't, even under these circumstances, picture Jin as the weepy uke. Sorry. And I have to say that Mugen's rather extreme actions don't make a lot of sense.

On a technical note, this story is fairly well written, but could do with some checking over for grammar.

Wow, that was one of the best and well developed fanfics i\'ve read in a long time. It was terrific, definitely not a waste of time!

another great and very hot fic!!! XD you never disapoint me!!! keep up the awesome work!!!! btw loved the last line

Kept wanting to hate Gashi since I was hoping for another hot tear jerker of a Mugen atonement scene...but now even i will probably have fantasies about him now XDDD So sweet! But why do i keep picturing Vash the Ssampede in my mind O_o ?

This was a lovely story that I kept coming back to see if it was finished. It had all the right elements and i want to thank you for doing one of the first few Samurai Champloo fics.

I have to say, this was the hardest fiction I have ever wrote...
After the first chapter I was really lost; thinking, \'what did I just do?\'. I had no idea where to go with it, or how to fix it. I agree the end was rushed *wrist screams in pain* and I am also not happy with the final Mugen/Jin meeting. I stopped and started this one so many times, it lost it\'s flow and tumbled clumsily.
Who knows? Maybe one day I will be able to change a few things, and make it better as a whole...
Until then, I\'m just happy it\'s done. ^_^U
Thank you to all who have read it, despite it\'s jumbled nature.

I have to admit that I didn\'t like the last chapter of this fic. Despite the length, to me
it just felt like you rushed it. I thought the beginning of this chapter was strong and
then it sort of went downhill with the story-line, and with the way you chose to write it.
One of the parts i disliked most was the meeting between Mugen and Jin. Personally
I would have enjoyed it if Mugen was more cruel by sort of rubbing what happened in
Jin\'s face. Maybe anything would have worked better than with the way it was ended. lol

Wow...I\'m glad you added chapters because I was sure this was gonna be a one-shot! Awww..Jin is so happy w/Gashi! Mugen...you dirty bastard! *kicks Mugen in the balls with steel toe boots*

Mugen saying he was gonna fuck them up...Priceless!!!


*****out of *****^-^

Really cruel! Poor Jin!!!!
Now to compensate.. Jin\'s Revenge... :p
Hope to read more chapters!!
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OH MY GOSH!!!! This is one sexy piece of work. For some odd reason, I got turned on by the whole spanking bit......it was.....beautiful........But yes! REVENGE! Definantely.........Mugen spanking Jin.......mmmmmm...........