rate_review Reviews

I love this story! and it's so hard to find good PoT fanfiction, that doesn't end, like really fast! there's like, no plot! just some small similarity to what could be called a plot or a story line and some characters development if the author actually bothered to take the time, but he/she/it (because sometimes the story is so badly writen, that you know, just know, it's got to be a it!) never really bothers, 'cause they just want to write some steamy sex scene! And there's nothing wrong with a sex scene, even better if its a steamy, well writen sex scene, but after a while it just gets boring! your story never does. congratulations! you have my eternal admiration.
*bows* this honored fanfiction reader, humbly bows before good, very good, PoT fanfiction, written by such an extraordinary author as yourself.
continue the good work! hope to read more of your works soon!
wishes of joy and inspiration for you!

Love this story. I've been avoiding it because its so long, but I find now I'm liking it for exactly the same reason. I adore how you've characterized Eiji, and how they sleep with each other on the pjone. Too cute! Chapter 12!? "Eiji....wait for me...." SO Hot I'm still sweating LOL. Great jo.

Wow...I stayed up until 4am, reading this, and I'm still only up to chapter 52!

But I wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying the characterizations in this story, and how you're chronicling the development of the various relationships. Nice, meaty stuff, and you do some lovely (and non-purple-prose) love and sex scenes. Thanks for sharing your stories...I'm glad to see that there's a sequel, and I look forward to reading that, too.

Whew! Finished!

^.^ I hope we find out what Tezuka's latest b'day present for Fuji is in the next fic. [Odd of mem I know.]

So, the kissing test was really that very first kiss that Oishi gave to Eiji expecting just to be teaching him? That's adorably sweet! Of course, everything about those two is.

Ooh, nice job with Fuji's break down, too. And Tezuka's reaction. :D

Off I go to start reading Learning ot Land...

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Heheh. You're probably tired of my rambling reviews. I know I would be, but I only review when I feel I really need to, and I don't do so very often. I just keep beng amazed by your way with emotions and reality. You write all that real life stuff in there but it's never boring or 'technical'. I can't remember the last time I bothered reading such a long fic, or this much fanfiction at all, for that matter. It's got nothing to do with the lemons either [though they're very well done]. I am completely absorbed in the plot, and your writing inspires me to work on my own Prince of Tennis fics. Actually I wrote a whole new one all because of this fic. I'm only up to chapter 48 or so, btw...

Oh, and speaking of, there's a chapter mislabelled Tezuka which is actually from Fuji's POV. It's the first in the series of Tezuka/Fuji chapter around the 40's mark. Just thought you should know.

And off I go to read some more.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'm at chapter 18 and I JUST realized this fic is 70 CHAPTER LONG!!!!!

I mean, not that that's a bad thing, but here I was thinking I could probably get through it tonight and then suddenly I notice the little scroll pad in the chapters button...

Oh, and for the record HOW could you throw that Tezuka chapter in right at that crucial point!? I'm going to have to go back and read it caus eI was completely caught up in Oishi/Eiji.

Oh, and as for my earlier review, you're everyday/dialogue writing has improved as the fic goes on, I'm happy to say. I'm also constantly awed by your ability to translate imagery to words, and also to make me believe what I wouldn't usually about characters: Such as Oishi being a bit of a playboy.

Nice job with Fuji, btw. I'm glad you haven't written him as a complete phsyco like most people.

And with that rambling, I have a LOT of reading to do...

I'm only at chapter two, but I just had to review!

Though the techinical aspects of your writing and some of the day to day stuff could use a little work, I find myself unable to care for the first time in a logn while. You've managed to cover the two aspects I find hardest very easily. I've never read such well described kisses, and the human thought patterns int his fic are wonderful!

A potentially uncomfortable situation was easy to read without cringing, and that's a huge feat! Then again, it is Kikumaru... :P

Okay, so this was a very round about way of saying it, but you've done a wonderful job so far, and I can't wait to read the rest!

>.< I'm only up to chapter 7 now but it's 7:45am. I've been reading since 4.

I think I can say honestly that this is one of the best fics I've ever read, and certainly the best of Prince of Tennis. Since I watched the show I've been searching for a good fic, in character, and not badly written. Thanks for finally ending my search.

First of all thank you for writing so looong and heartwarming story. I got into pot universe something like a month ago and couldn´t find that kind of fics. Little too much sex for me, BUT it´s so well written! Write some books, why don´t you. Extrahug becauce your fics feature my faworite pairings. Tezuka got me into pot, but Eiji took me by storm^_^ Right now I´m in part 59 of Learning to fall. Keep up the good work! (Wawes hands around and goes to read more)

I just finished chapter 26...sorry for not reviewing earlier. I just got caught up in the story ^^;

Wow, it's amazing how you've managed to create something like this! I was actually expecting drabbles or something, but some of these chapters are REALLY long! Fantastic ^_^

Lol, do many people know what NLP is, or do you get asked about it a lot by reviewers? Coincidentally, I just went to a sort of NLP camp-ish thing a few weeks ago, so it makes me smile to think Fuji uses it in this story.

I'm so glad about the whole reversi-ness of your fic! I don't really hate reading standard Seme!Oishi and Uke!Eiji, but versatility is just so much better ^_^ I feel so bad for Fuji, and I can't wait to read more on his and Tez's relationship! (Not that I'm no longer interested in Oishi and Eiji! Not at all! I just really want to see Fuji happy...and I think Tezuka can make him. So, yeah...)

Anyway, I'm totally hooked on your story! I wish I didn't have real-life stuff to do so I could just finish this and start reading L2L already! Meh, I've only watched up to epi 70 or something, so I might have to watch the rest before reading the sequel (there's no way I'm going to stop reading this, even if it'll spoil some stuff for me! *addicted*)

So...yeah. Thanks for writing this story! I'm really enjoying it!