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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Now that I finally have my laptop back...
Wow! Last chapter! That was sudden!
Still, I enjoyed it. The two new characters are rather interesting. I keep wondering if they're going to end up in Hyoutei together and suddenly pop out of the woodwork, but probably not, ne? Well, onto Learning to Play!
Wow! Last chapter! That was sudden!
Still, I enjoyed it. The two new characters are rather interesting. I keep wondering if they're going to end up in Hyoutei together and suddenly pop out of the woodwork, but probably not, ne? Well, onto Learning to Play!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... so, yes. I just wanted to review because I love the introspection and intertwined relationships between all the characters in this fic, and I'm stunned that you don't have more reviews for such a great story. Perhaps people are put off by the epic proportions of it... but I love it. Now that I read it all in one big rush, I have to wait just like everyone else for LtP. XD
I'd have to say that my favorite pairing in this fic is Shishido/Ohtori. There's just something so *insert babbling praise here* about it that makes my mind take a break from reality to just fangirl away.
The only slight complaint I have about the fic is that the characters have a tendency to... think... too much. It distracts from the storyline when they keep mentally drifting off and going on long tangents. Honestly, it's not that big of a problem, but by cutting out some unnecessary extras (such as the repetition of the same information), your story would become more focused and flow more smoothly.
That said, thank you so much for writing, and I love the depth you give to each character, where it's almost like meeting them for the first time and truly understanding where they come from. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next installment!
I'd have to say that my favorite pairing in this fic is Shishido/Ohtori. There's just something so *insert babbling praise here* about it that makes my mind take a break from reality to just fangirl away.
The only slight complaint I have about the fic is that the characters have a tendency to... think... too much. It distracts from the storyline when they keep mentally drifting off and going on long tangents. Honestly, it's not that big of a problem, but by cutting out some unnecessary extras (such as the repetition of the same information), your story would become more focused and flow more smoothly.
That said, thank you so much for writing, and I love the depth you give to each character, where it's almost like meeting them for the first time and truly understanding where they come from. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next installment!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! a new chapter... new characters. yeah!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.< Stupid Daily Moment of Downtime. Kicked in between writing my review and submitting it...
Anyway, I raved about the chapter as usual, expressed my intense curiosity at Renji's name being used (I'm dying to know if he's involved or if they had enough 'data' on Inui to use Renji against him), and I was delighted by the organized system that seems to be behind the against.
Oh yeah, and I feel sorry for Inui. Sounds like his jaw's broken. Ouch. (Along with plenty else.)
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the first time I've been able to et my mind off of my up and coming exams and assignments all day.
Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com
Anyway, I raved about the chapter as usual, expressed my intense curiosity at Renji's name being used (I'm dying to know if he's involved or if they had enough 'data' on Inui to use Renji against him), and I was delighted by the organized system that seems to be behind the against.
Oh yeah, and I feel sorry for Inui. Sounds like his jaw's broken. Ouch. (Along with plenty else.)
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the first time I've been able to et my mind off of my up and coming exams and assignments all day.
Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! OMG you just totally made my day by updating this! This is my absolute favorite story on this website. You rock. Keep the updates coming, and you really deserve waaaay more reviews than you have (I'm sorry it took so long for me to get off my lazy ass and review)
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Finally had a chance to read through the recent chapters. ^.^
Gakuto and Oshitari are as adorable as always. [By the way, I'm quite sure I can blame my obsession with Oshitari on this fic. :P]
But wow. Inui's mind is a scary, scary place... Far scarier than any tensai's.
On that note... Nicely done! I'm in awe. A little fearful, but definitely in awe of your ability to write him so well.
Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Krystal_Epyon
Gakuto and Oshitari are as adorable as always. [By the way, I'm quite sure I can blame my obsession with Oshitari on this fic. :P]
But wow. Inui's mind is a scary, scary place... Far scarier than any tensai's.
On that note... Nicely done! I'm in awe. A little fearful, but definitely in awe of your ability to write him so well.
Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Krystal_Epyon
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow--what an intricate (and engrossing) story of intrigue, romance, and sexual politics. You have a real knack for characterizations, and I can't wait to see where you take this story next!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wai!!1 This was so awsome!! ^_^ I loved these two chapters. they were so good and made me remember my love of fudomine.. it's been so logn sicne i watched or read prince of tennis. but after ym lesson I sat my ass downa dn re read a few chapters, and read the new ones. Oh I so hope that it's Inu/Kamio/Tachibana ^_^ that pairing is so smexy. Gosh I can't wait for the enxt chapters.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I should warn you that I am trying desperately not to curse right now...
WHY WOULD YOU TO THAT!? That's cruel! I neeeeeeed to know what happens! I must! It's a matter of life and death!
Is that not the home that Shinji uses when the others stay over? Doesn he break into someone else's house? Is he trying to hea dKamio off on the way? AHHH!!!!
And AWWWWWW! I was so hoping it would be Tachibana/Ibu, although it seems liek there's still room for Kamio to creep in there somewhere. :P
I'm so happy. ^.^ Shinji's so cute, and Tachibana is such a deary. ^.^
btw... ROTFL
He had seen Mori to Uchimura do this
I think you meant Mori and Uchimura. I just find it so funny cause I had a Japanese class this morning and accidently said something along those lines on the phone earlier.
Anyway... Wonderful two chapters. I simply can't wait for more - of any pairing, but especially this one. My curiosity has been peaked. ^.^
Why do I get the feeling Tachibana won't be calling Yasuo any time soon?
WHY WOULD YOU TO THAT!? That's cruel! I neeeeeeed to know what happens! I must! It's a matter of life and death!
Is that not the home that Shinji uses when the others stay over? Doesn he break into someone else's house? Is he trying to hea dKamio off on the way? AHHH!!!!
And AWWWWWW! I was so hoping it would be Tachibana/Ibu, although it seems liek there's still room for Kamio to creep in there somewhere. :P
I'm so happy. ^.^ Shinji's so cute, and Tachibana is such a deary. ^.^
btw... ROTFL
He had seen Mori to Uchimura do this
I think you meant Mori and Uchimura. I just find it so funny cause I had a Japanese class this morning and accidently said something along those lines on the phone earlier.
Anyway... Wonderful two chapters. I simply can't wait for more - of any pairing, but especially this one. My curiosity has been peaked. ^.^
Why do I get the feeling Tachibana won't be calling Yasuo any time soon?
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna read this nooooooww!!!!! But I can't, cause I'm tiiiired. First chance I get [which may be a while cause it's gonna be a busy week] I'm reading these chapters, so just wait up for my review. ^.^