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Oops! I missed the new Gakuto chapter. >.<

Whee!!!!! Tensai unleashed!!! I can't wait! ^.^

I wonder what this favo of Gakuto's is, and what Yuushi wants to do to him...

Ooh! I do so hope Shishido gets to play!!!

*sighs* I'm really starting to hate Atobe, though, which is a shame. But I know he thinks he has good intentions.

Anyway, I can't believe I didn't notice this was updated. So, sorry for the late review.

ARGH! That damn Naomi! And that Yuri chick. >.< I'm dying with curiosity to know what's going on. And I keep wondering if there were bugs in Shiori's room that picked up the conversation in the closet.

Also, I can't help but wonder if Shiori took their hands off him to protect him rather than out of some claim. I guess I want to her to have some redemption considering that Atobe wanted her rather than Naomi.

Hmmm. I usualy don't so this, but: PLEASE update soooon!!! Update lots! XD I'm enjoying this Hyoutei arc very much, but at the same time I want to know what's goign on with Seigaku and with Tachibana and Yuuta and everyone! I want it all at once!

Oh, and I also wanted to thank you, because this story was originally responsible for the PoT writing streak I've been on, and these latest chapters have renewed my resolve to keep writing. If only cause I know how it feels to be dying for more. ^.^

Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com

WOOO!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!! I'M SO HAPPY!! *DANCES AROUND THE ROOM* I LOVE THE STORY... KEEP UP TH GOOD WORK!!

Wow. I FINALLY got through all of this... Oh where to begin, what to say? Hmmm, each group individually, then...

Shishido/Ootori: AHHHH KAWAI!!!!!/fangirl mode. They're so sweet in this fic, even when Shishido is the opposite of sweet it's sweet. [If that makes ANY sense at ALL] I usually hate sweet, but... this is an exception. I'm dying to know who those three were. Shishido's twin, I'm guessing, the friend that had somethin to do with ice skating [is there even a friend or am I just making that up?] and Ootori's best friend? I guess I'll just have to keep hanging out for more. Heheheh. I usually can't stand Gakuto, but now I just want to see him and Shishido make up, though that's probably not going to happen. :P

On that note...

Gakuto/Oshitari: Muwahahaha! Tensai goodness. [Keep in mind that I'm terribly new to the fandom and haven't read many of these pairings before - at least not well done like this.] I'm loving it! I've gotten over my fear of that awful bowl cut so I can enjoy this fic. :P I'm going crazy trying to match up a timeline of these two couples in my mind, though. Shishido and Ootori are obviously way ahead. Oh, and what happened to the doubles practice with being tied together and all? Maybe my timeline jumping is getting me lost. >.< Honestly that's the only problem I have with this. Eventually I just gave up and started reading by POV rather than chapter.

Fuji Yuuta: I can't wait to see more of this. Those poor twins. Poor Yuuta. [Poor Fuji and Tezuka.]

Tachibana: Eheheheh. Fascinating. Truly. I want more of the present, though, with Kamio and Shinji and the others. As interesting as Tachibana's past is, I'm excited to see where this is going.

Atobe: At first I wanted so badly for him to get back together with Shishido, but you've done your job well. Now I want to see him live happily ever after with Jiroh. I'd love to see more from his point of view, and maybe even from Jiroh's. Oh! And that fight! Wassitabout!? I'm dying to know!!!

Heheheh. Poor angsty boys. Seems like they've all had a really hard time - and lets not forget about the Seigaku contingent.

Oh, speaking of... I wonder what this plan of Inui's is... and what's going to happen with poor Momo as it looks like Kaidoh and Inui will eventually pair off. ^.^

Well, I guess I'm moving onto that Valentines peice now, heheh... Hope to see and update, soon.

If you're in the practice of emailing: Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com

If not, I'll just have to keep checking the slow way. :p

Oh, btw, I dedicated my fic Flavors of Cruelty to you as this fic is what spawned the idea in my head. No copyright infringement, I promise, just some good old typically screwed up Fuji.

Thanks for reviving my faith in fanfiction.

i LOVEEEEEEEE your storyy... it's soooo touchinggg!!!!!!!!! *sniff sniff*....there is still continue.....rite??????? please say yesssss...gambatte!!

I laughed so hard when i read this! =D

"Remember last year?" Yuushi paused as if waiting for a response. Gakuto nodded but was annoyed. Of course he remembered last year! He wondered if Yuushi was the result of a first cousin marriage.

I've started reading this and find all the background detail and character profiles you've created to be quite entertaining and intense. Quite honestly, I love it! And holy cow, 100+ chapters of Learning to Land plus all the chapters of Learning to Fall - you're a machine! =D

Thanks for writing this, I look forward to reading both stories in full.... it may take me a few months, but I'll do it!

Man I love this story so much! I am soo happy you updated hell i stayed up till 4 am reading and catching up, it's just so awsome and sucks me in and i never want to get out. it's liek the perfect blend of everythign in a story keep it up i can't wait for the enxt update!!!

YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR AN UPDATE!! I WAS STARTING TO LOSE HOPE!! I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THE UPDATE THAT I ALMOST STARTED TO CRY!! I'M SO HAPPY!!

Wow... you're an amaizing writer 'cuz i'm so hook up with your story that i can't stop reading it.
Hope you can post soon... wanna know what's gonna happent.
specially with gakuto & yuushi, there's so much going on annd they such a cute couple!
gods you're the best!