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Hmm... this story had potential, but your characters are too OOC for me. But at least others seems to enjoy it.

Oh this is so wonderful I read ALL these chapters and they've been so wonderful teh twists the turns the drama teh angst the passion ALL of it though i will say...


It's much too long! Why not have seprate complete stories?

Doesn't matter, I'm addicted. Spent three days reading it all! Thanks!

Why i do believe that chapter 32 is acctually chapter 31, you may want to fix that

I love this story and can't wait to read more of it

Loved the first one. Loved this one even more. Hurray for ShishiTori. x333

can\'t wait for the new chapters! i really want to see what happens with ootori and with inui!! ^_^ this is a great continuation form learning to fall! GAH! I want to read more now~!!

To Fellow Fans of L2L: I followed the author over to livejournal....and this fic is on CHAPTER 78!!!!!!!
I spent 3 sleepless days getting caught up and it was so worth it. I am anxiously waiting for more.
I highly recommend that you check it out. You have to go back to 12/04 to start on CH 25.
Here is her address again livejournal.com/users/suteishichic. :)

~slow blinks~ This is very good. Inui is kinda... but that\'s good it works for the plot i wonder what the heck is going on between Taka-san and Fuji-sempai that he has that reaction...what did Fuji do to him to..fix him? i know he plays mind games but that\'s more of a hypnatism (sp?) thing it seems. Kaidoh and Momoshiro are very interesting back stories especially how the rivalry started and continued. Hmmmmmmmm i really want to read more about Ohtari and Shishido, i want to re watch those episodes that they were in to see what i can get out of them. I like your cut-throat portrayel (sp), of Atobe\'s world and school. Ohtari has gray hair and that\'s very interesting, but you reason was ingenuous...

Now that\'s i\'ve said all those nice things update again, onegaishimasu. then i\'ll review every chapter, i\'m totally entralled by your character usages.

please!

omgoddess, so great!! read all 24 ch\'s you have up so far and i\'m sooooooooo craving more!! please update soon, this is great!! i knew inui would be up to something just from knowing his feelings from LTF and knowing his personality, but omgoddess conspiracy!!! what the heck did he do in the bathroom?(that had to be his doing, nya?) and what did he give all the guys that was making everyone be irritable on the courts too?? and the incorporation of hyoutei and all the relationships there, plus how they tie into the pasts of the seigaku boys is very coolzies... and now this ohtori plotline is very intriguing to me... like alot of the time when it switches perspective away from oishi or eiji, i can\'t wait til it\'s them again, though i still love the other chapters... but with this ohtori stuff i find i can\'t wait for more of that either!! nya, what\'s gonna happen with kaidoh? momo? ohtori? shishido? atobe? EVERYONE???? hoi, pllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee update soon!! (ah, did i mention that ever since like the 4th chapter of LTF i\'ve been addicted to \"hoi\" and \"nya\" lol) anyway..... *bribes fic-ka with boxes of pocky*

~lg

I have to say this is the best!!!! PoT fanfic i\'ve read yet. The story is absoloutly beautiful. I love it so much. You made me cry too *pats Ohtori* poor poor Ohtori i hope you get a happy ending.
I can bearly wait for the next chapter (i never really got the whole patience deal) and hope you update soon
love love love this fic so much
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