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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
kyolover, I don't normally review a story until the last chapter, but your comment at the beginning of this chapter prompted me to review now. For your first yaoi, I think you are doing a wonderful job. This story is AWESOME!!! I'm loving it, and you know what they say, "practice makes perfect" so I guess that means you have to write much much more. I like your writing style, and the only bad thing I can say is that there are a few spelling errors, but I have noticed they are only words that have multiple spellings. Keep up the good work.
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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Kyolover, I will be impatiently waiting for more of this thrillingly HOT story. I can't wait!!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If Momiji's there does that mean he's gonna get in on the fun in upcoming chapters? >w<
This is really awesome, keep up the good work!
This is really awesome, keep up the good work!
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is crazy hott... love the scene in the car... not gonna lie, kyoxharu is just plain hott... and Haru jacking him off right next to Yuki... yeah!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, i hope you update it soon
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the story I've looked for an update!
maybe next time Kyo/Ayame,Kyo for the first time on top?
maybe next time Kyo/Ayame,Kyo for the first time on top?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what about aya, ritsu, & momiji? we havent seen kyo with them yet.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story plot it's awesome. Kudos
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! XD I NEED MORE NOW!!! SERIOUSLY, I AIN'T PLAYIN!! MUST HAVE MORE!! HATORI, SHIGURE, HARU, AND KURENO!!! AND YUKI MOLESTATION?!?! OMFG!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO FINISH WRITING THIS!! I'LL BE FOREVER DEPRESSED IF YOU STOP AND NEVER FINISH!!
~Chi-chan~
~Chi-chan~
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0.0 holy....so awesome 0.0.....(except for the Yuki part) but other then that AWESOME! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!