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Bloody Brilliant!!!

I love Hatori/Kyo!!!!

I want some Haru/Kyo as well! Let our Kitty top! Black Haru gets dominatet...Oooh! That just screams \"Handcuffs\" *evilgrin*

Bondage! Kyo, Haru and BONDAGE!!! Doesn\'t matter which one is tied up, just that one of them should, sometime, for a certain time, be tied up! And maybe Yuki could walk in on them! Or Shigure and/or Hatori and/or Yuki could be watching! That would be soooooo hot! Just imagining one of these situation makes me drool... and now I have to go masturbate (reading your story and imagining those things can do that to a girl (or a gay/bi guy)).

You are such a great writer! (I wouldn\'t be able to write something like that with out having to at least fan myself between each chapter!)

Update soon... (right now, imagine Shigure doing puppy dog eyes (I don\'t how anyone could resist him doing those eyes because he IS the zodiac\'s dog!))

That was soo hot!!!!! Your lemons are just as goon as the ones the older writers do. update soon

I\'m soo glad you decided to continue the story. ( The new lemon was great by the way) And you\'re right Rin and Tohru are really annoying!! Update soon

heyur story is really good! i wish i could write in such good detail ! lol check out my adn rachelx\'s stroy its called affairs!

It is a very good job for your first time writing guy on guy action. I really must publish my attempt like you did to see how good it was. Keep writing it is getting way interesting.

So there\'s going to be another chapter?

I love a uke Kyo!! This is story is great! The format is sooo much better than the first chapter and a lot easier to read.

I love it, you defenetly need to come out with the next chapter soon. Please. I love the pairing and am curious as to if your going to add more. Looking forward to it. =)

that\'s the way to think hatori! update again soon!

Not too bad, not too bad at all. Indeed, I liked it, it was a nice read.^_^