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i can't wait for more! :)
ASOTA

When we gonna get more hun? I miss this story!

more must have more

the day has finally arrived. so, when will they
have a chance to fight. i want to see some good
old fashion gutting. it seems that whenever a
vision is changed something worse seems to
take the place of the original one. but i have
to tell you that vision had of ken slicing that
policeman's spine opening was pretty gruesome.

and poor omi. out of all of them, in the new
vision he is the only one to die. i guess in
a way he really is of no value. at least
with ken they have another beserker like
farfarello. this story just gets better and
better every time i read it.

my sister and i read this story together and
after she finished she said instead of you
calling this chapter momentum. she said it
should have been called the 'Calm Before the
Storm'.

also will crawford tell schuldig about his
new vision about what happens to the three
of them. and will hearing that finally
prompt them into telling crawford about
the fusion. it seems that that might
be what they need to get away from
rosencrantz. or it could be what gets
them captured. is that what crawford's
vision meant? did rosencrantz find out about
the fusion and will be holding aya as a
hostage to make yohji and schuldig do whatever
they tell them to do.

I simply love your description in chapter 21, you managed to describe that sort of play quite accurately.
[My partner sends her thanks for reminding me how much I like this sort of thing.]
I adore your writing very much and can't wait to continue reading the rest of what you've posted.

I love your stories (all of them). Thanks for the update.

Huzzah! I'm so happy that you're continuing this story, it's one of my favorites. Wonderful job as always. I like the fact that Yohji's mindscape is made up of rich colors and textures, I think it suits him.

I'm in love with this. Your characters are extremely well written and "Nightmare" had me holding my breath! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

First, I know I should have commented after every chapter...but I just can't seem to stop myself from going on to the next and the next. I'm a speed reader, unfortunately, and can't help myself. So I apologize. I'll try to do better!

This is such an incredible story! The way you describe everything...from the sex and kink (which is incredibly hot and amazing) to everyone's feelings, is just awesome. You have such a gift for story-telling! Before finding your page here, I had never watched the anime that this is based on. Now, I'm a big fan, and have watched most of them. So thank you for that!

I read your Saiyuki stories first. Then, found the first & second parts to Seismic Tryst (because of the Saiyuki tag), and loved it as well. Of course, that led me to this story and it's predecessor. Now, I've read a good amount of what you've posted...even if I haven't been familiar with the characters. (I also loved your Inuyasha stories!)

I've enjoyed every thing I've read by you, and they all have that same "grab me by the throat and drag me into it" quality. I absolutely love your work! And, of course, I'm checking back all the time for updates to this and Beautifully Broken Evolution. I can't wait for both! (Beautifully Broken Evolution is one of the two best Saiyuki fics I've ever read.)

I can honestly say that I can count the number of authors that I'm totally addicted to on one hand. That's still the case, but you're on there too, now. You have such an amazing talent. Thank you so much for sharing it with me!

Lauren
laurenlv@cox.net

I loved Sharp & Guilty Pleasures...and I loved this too! The entire Arc was awesome! Will this one be added to?

The way you write...God! You completely drag me down into the story, and if I suffocate, that's okay.

Loved every minute of it!