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please update soon

don't you dare just leave this series as just this. I want to see more of are favorite threesome. Please update soon.

this fic is so HOT!!! plz more!!! and please add more on Brads visions!!! i can't wait to see what'sgonna happen :)

Another great update. And finally the little hamster in Yohji's brain took the correct path and he's starting to figure out what all the emotions swirling around him mean. It always amazes me how effectively you work in threads of plot between the tons of hot smut and I'm looking forward to where the story takes us just as much as the next big sex scene. You write an awesome, believable threesome and the kinks are just tantilizing and juicy enough to appeal to the nauty and nice in every person. Well done!

Nice chapter. Lots of kink and cock teasing going on. ...I cried during the 'scene' where Yohji realizes that Aya loves him. Poor Schu...I feel for him when he's all jealous that Yohji loves Aya but is not sure about him. At least he has Aya's love :).

When Brad tells Farf about the cleaners I wasn't expecting what happened next. Though when that scene started playing out I was sure that Schu and Aya would do everything in their power to protect Yohji from harm, since after all they both love him deeply. Can't wait to see what Brad tells them in the next chapter.

Congrats on updating between The Lost Cadre and R.L. :D

I love this fic!! The threesome you have going is to die for. I can't wait to see what else is going to come next now that the angst is once again coming into the picture. And of course, since Yohji is my absolute fav, I'm adoring this fic even more!! Keep writing. Hope to see more of this story soon!!! :)

--blinks-- You...dirty...dirty dog....

You go from an awesome freaking sex scene...Very hott by the way (No one does revenge like Fujimiya Ran!).. To one of the more well written Farf's I've ever seen...

And then you have my poor Yohji getting threatened and cut?? Bad doggy, no treat....

What a way to flip flop....However, it was all well written and continued the story nicely. I guess I can't complain too much.

And Brad? Going "Shit. Fuck. Piss." Priceless!

i jumped for joy when i saw your next chapters. Poor farfie he just
so impatinent. but anyway, all i can really say is that 'no one does
revenge like fujimiya ran.

woohoo you updated

Ah! So, so glad you updated. I particularly love this story because it is unbelievably hot, but also has a fascinating plot that keeps me coming back for more. I often find one or the other of those qualities, your story and a rare and truly oustanding exception. I look forward to each of your updates, as always. I really enjoy the opportunity to hear the voices of so many different characters in the 1st person POV. I'm sorry that I don't review more, but I genuinely love your style and am so glad you've posted!