rate_review Reviews

So glad you updated...definitely worth waiting for!
I can't wait for more insight into Crawford's vision.
As always, looking forward to reading more!

Wow!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. You really are portrayig the characters well.
That last sceen with Farf was major coolness. Yay for possesive Ran and Schuldig when it comes to Yohji. =^.^=

i have to admit to being something of a slacker , in that i've been reading and not reviewing. But I've really enjoyed this fic so far (and it's prequel) and always look forward to updates.

(a member of ass-anon)

homina!! this arc is HOT!!!! I don\'t want your series to end, but i can\'t wait for the next installation. Seems like you\'re in for the long haul, so i\'m happy. Love the lemons, and the characterization of Ran is sooo~~~ dead-on accurate. Keep up the good work,

your new fan

Just read the 14 chapters currently posted for the first time. I absolutely love your characterizations. Three primary players are well fleshed out and none of them are such utter bastards that the reader can\'t associate with them as they are in some stories. Also, Yohji\'s not stupid, which is nice for a change. Excellent writing, hope there\'s more!

Wow! I realy like your fic, it was an interesting read it caught my full attention and couldn\'t get my eyes of it. Please continue this fic, I ancious to find out more about that weird vision Brad had. Exelent fix please write more!

I love the way the characters and the story are developing. You are a genius. I was going to say that you can\'t do NaNo because you have to write more of this! Then I remembered that I am doing NaNo too, so I won\'t have time to read anything else. So good luck with NaNo and please get back to this on Dec 1! Pretty please?

All i can say after reading playtime is HOT HOT HOT. But the interlude was so mysterious. i just love this storyline. i\'m just
dying to see where this will end. does bradley\'s vision means death for the trio or is it something more insidious. ooohhh, i\'m
just dying to know.

...the sex was great, then you walked out on us. Mann..what am I supposed to do from now till you finish Nano... I think that was the best bondage I\'ve read...it certainly was very detailed, and very hot. That ending though...I knew it would have to end on a cliff, but man this is a HUGE cliff with no visible way down without anyone getting hurt. Oh man...I think it was the vision ending that\'s now got me craving for more so I can find out what happened. Very VERY effective ending that I\'m almost mad that you used it, and you won\'t be updating for a while. Ah well...best of luck in nano and I hope to see you soon.

Sexxi Twisted Angel

I\'d molest you, but there\'s that little problem of you not liking chicks. I think I\'ll just go molest myself or something instead. Loved the smut and the kink and the hint of something big to come. Squall\'s wisely not commenting on the statement about control freaks needing to be out of control in the bedroom.

CP the horny