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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great triad! I love this arc. Yohji and Aya are perfect, and Schuldich is really funny.
I thought Crawford should be more of a bastard though. I like the concept of the cleaners though. It makes sense.
And the angst is great. Can totally see Aya being masochistic and Yohji being horrified and hurt by it.
I thought Crawford should be more of a bastard though. I like the concept of the cleaners though. It makes sense.
And the angst is great. Can totally see Aya being masochistic and Yohji being horrified and hurt by it.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ID, it\'s Beysie from Kirafics!!!! I haven\'t reviewed anyone in a very long time, so consider yourself lucky I\'ve given two now! LOL j/k... Such a good dog you are! I read the first arc, and now this... I\'ve finally caught up and finished chap 10... I can\'t wait for more! Damn, I gotta direct Schu and Rann here, I think they\'d love how you\'ve depicted them... quite accurate! Except that our Schuldig is uke... LOL It\'s funny because IC he and Rann are both married to Yohji too! Anyway, I went off topic... this fic is awsome! It drew me in so much... I kept losing track of time. I look forward to the next update!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve finally gotten to read the last couple of chapters like I\'ve been promising myself to do for too long!
I\'ts hard to review when I\'ve already said how much I love this arc. But it just gets better and more intriguing.
I\'m not sure who I feel sorriest for at the moment - although it think it might come down to Schuldig and Crawford, seeing as Aya is pissed off with both of them. And then there\'s poor Yohji as well.
Can\'t wait to see what Crawford has in mind, and if Aya decides to act on his plans of revenge!
I\'ts hard to review when I\'ve already said how much I love this arc. But it just gets better and more intriguing.
I\'m not sure who I feel sorriest for at the moment - although it think it might come down to Schuldig and Crawford, seeing as Aya is pissed off with both of them. And then there\'s poor Yohji as well.
Can\'t wait to see what Crawford has in mind, and if Aya decides to act on his plans of revenge!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fanfic so much, Schuldig x Aya x Yohji is just one hell of a perfect threesome. And you write it so well ^_^ I will definitely devour every single new chapter, so please write more!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh...revelations for everyone in these last two chappies. Aw...Brad\'s being a bit of an asshole isn\'t he. Schu and Aya are going to be pissed...after all Aya\'s already pissed by Schu and Schu by Brad. So then everyone will want to kill Brad lol...or...well...no predicting for me. I\'ll wait like a good girl.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. i\'ve been dying to see what would happen next and i am
a very happy kitty. keep it coming i definitely want to know what
happens next. also, will Brad tell Yohji that the two of them had
met before?
a very happy kitty. keep it coming i definitely want to know what
happens next. also, will Brad tell Yohji that the two of them had
met before?
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you moved this from being a PWP to actually having a story line...keep up the good work...can\'t wait for more
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You dirty dog!
(I can\'t break tradition)
This chapter and Interlude were deep...I like it.
Not that the first story of mind blowing sex wasn\'t neat, but this is awesome...The possibilities are endless, I adore it! I can\'t wait for the next update...Dun make us wait so long next time!
Apollo
(I can\'t break tradition)
This chapter and Interlude were deep...I like it.
Not that the first story of mind blowing sex wasn\'t neat, but this is awesome...The possibilities are endless, I adore it! I can\'t wait for the next update...Dun make us wait so long next time!
Apollo
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved Farf and Nagi in these last two chapters... what a shock to find out that Schu was involved with two of the Weiss boys. And now we know a bit more about Yohji\'s talent. This is a great story... I can hardly wait to read more, and was so happy to see an update right before going to bed :)
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah updates! I read both this and the push it update ::thumb up:: as always, you have awesome story lines and keep my favorite characters in character. I didn\'t even read Weiss Kreuz until i checked out all your posts. At the risk of sounding a little too admiring...whatever you post, i\'ll read.