rate_review Reviews

Evil wench, teasing us all like this. Now I\'m wondering where you\'re going to go with this. Is it bad that I can relate to the feeling of being a human battery everyone seems to drain? *Slaps you with a fish*

CP the silly

Oh please write more you can\'t stop there.need more !

You dirty dog...

Oops...I hit the wrong keys and sent that one early - Ah well, it still sorta kinda starts this review cause in my mind I was only leaving one...That prolly didn\'t make much sense, but then again it is like 7am in the morning and my head is still going in circles from the last chappie and interlude.

That is SOOO something Aya would do, thinking that he needed to do a penance...and that glove...that was inspired? firghtening? Is it real? Or did you make it up?

And poor Yohji, he is always being portrayed as the sex toy, it\'s so natural that he would end up thinking that Aya thinks of him like that (Personally, I think it\'s his own fault for whoring around so much, but that\'s just my opinion)

I just am adoring this - I really think that if you entered this in the scarlet seducations contest you would have a good chance of winning, or even the first one...There\'s a yahoo group for the contest and I think the link is on the group. Email me, I\'ll let you know!

Apollo

(Oh, and just for good measure, \"You dirty dog!\"

Aya in bondage... mmm, my favorite.
Despite the reasons behind it, that scene was *so* hot! LOVED it.

Witnessing the aftermath and lost-Aya\'s despair was just heartbreaking. But I can really understand Yoji\'s feelings and upset. Aya\'s rationale really is such a mess in that pretty little head of his. Hoping they\'ll be able to work through this okay.

Wow...this is like crazy good, but im like half dead as I read those last two chapters so yea. That\'s really sad actually...poor Aya, and Yohji, with Schu stuck between and trying not to get too attached. awww...okee good night and update soon!

Aya: “Spank me hard until I tell you to stop.”

!!! *nosebleeds to death*

I just had to go read Penance again <3. Unh, Aya needy and squirming is such a turn on! Especially when he\'s doing it against Yoji.

Aya: “Spank me hard until I tell you to stop.”

!!! *nosebleeds to death*

I just had to go read Penance again *love*. Unh, Aya needy and squirming is such a turn on! Especially when it\'s up against Yoji.

(have to stop spamming you now)

OH YEAH! that was magnificent. i just read penance and interlude and it was the best. Poor
yohji you have to feel sorry for him. and poor schu, i hope you make it better for him in
your next installment. . . right?! i will be looking forward to it.