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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh..... I have goosebumps that was so good!
Intriguing idea all around. Amazing descriptions and the disjointed quality really made me feel what was going on.^_^
Thanks for making me grin like an idiot. Loved it!
Awesomely done!
Intriguing idea all around. Amazing descriptions and the disjointed quality really made me feel what was going on.^_^
Thanks for making me grin like an idiot. Loved it!
Awesomely done!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was totally amazing. I especially liked Sanzo\'s interior monologue, how it was all jumbled together and literal stream of conciousness, such as thinking about killing Gojyo while having sex with Goku. Very well written and in-character, bravo! Write more soon!