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well, they are wolves. What clothing do they truly have to begin with? their human forms are meant to fool humans only, and to appear to us as humans, I'm going onto the idea that those clothes aren't truly there in reality, but just an imagination.

This story is a bit choppy.
Like when the hell did they get their clothes off?
It was pretty good in the beginning but other than that it was weird.

This is pretty good. There are hardly any with Hige and Toboe..if
there are I haven\'t found them yet. ::smiles::: Keep on writing.

This is very cute, though one thing I learned to do (with my first fic) was that making paragraphs (even if you\'re like me and have no concept of them) helps with getting readers. Having everything scrunched together kind of hurts the eyes and makes it easy to lose your place reading. You have a lot of potentiol as a writer, I\'m interested to see what else you may come out with.

Your first huh? Not bad, it was a cute little fic

One of the first Fan Ficts I ever wrote. I will try to add the next chapter in a lil while. The next one is called \"This one is a flower, not a cherry\"
I hope that anyone who reads this likes it, and that I can be able to read some good reviews, and some that might help my writing. Thank you! ^_^