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Well... aside from the misspellings and the factual errors, it was... well... uninspiring. Can't you be bothered to use the spellchecker? Can't you get someone to beta read for you? (I will if nobody else will.)

hope to see more. i liked it. please update eventualy?

Why do you always write unfaithful stories?Weird.
And fix your goddamn grammAr!Use your education!

update!

Interesting, although a bit angsty.

If you want people to stop telling you your grammar (sic) needs work, you need to, well, work on it. I noticed you asked for a beta before, and I saw at least one person offer to beta for you in the reviews of your first story--it might have been more than one, even. Did that deal fall through?

Not everyone is good at grammar and spelling, and it doesn\'t mean you\'re not smart or a bad writer if you\'re not, but mistakes do throw a reader out of a fic and make it a lot harder to understand. It\'s an important part of writing something enjoyable.

If you need a beta, check out Ayla\'s message at the top of the page--there\'s a Yahoo group set up specifically for that purpose, and I\'m sure someone there would be happy to help you out. If spell check and grammar check just aren\'t doing it for you, try that.

Just yelling at anyone who dares mention it isn\'t going to help the problem any, because they\'re not wrong for pointing it out, and many of them have done so politely.

Vol 5 huh, why don\'t you do like me, i live in Brazil were the manga isnt being published, so i dowload then in the net, if you wanna i can give my fonts.

OOOO nice work man

Wow, thanks its the first time that someone answer my request. The fic was very good, the part of the drama was just like i wished it would be. About other requests, just answer me in what chapter of the manga you are, so i can make requests in base of some chapters that you already read, in my case im at the chapter 82(vol 10). Thanks again.

It was okay. Still you should fix up your grammer and spelling.