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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! you\'ve posted your story here that\'s great!!!!!! I was told by a friend about your story and I love them, your a great writer and am really amaze to know its not your native language. Keep up with the more that excellent work
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the Oniwabanshu arc of the story, and I can\'t wait to see if Saitoh will uncover the truth behind Mariko.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The amount of effort that Okita uses to hide his illness adds a realistic but also sad touch to the story.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Many unexpected turns, both romantic and political (for chapter 14)
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Though I understand why you are. I can only be thankful that you didn’t have the idea to observe him in the bathhouse yet…”
LOL
LOL
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good way to connect Okita and the Oniwanbanshu. Great observation from Okita about Aoshi.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Though I understand why you are. I can only be thankful that you didn’t have the idea to observe him in the bathhouse yet…” LOL. Excellent line
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiko makes for a great scape goat. The chapter adds more mystery to the crazy girl
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
simply, AWESOME!! i iove the way u find out the real facts about japan and such, unlike many who throws in watever they feel like. also im amazed that u managed not to make tokio and saitou out of character as they are some of the hardest character to stay in character.
Congratulation on finishing this wonderful piece of story.
Congratulation on finishing this wonderful piece of story.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best fic\'s I\'ve ever read! This is a very well written fic and the research and history you put into it are amazing!! I hope to see more of your work in the future. :o)