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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scene in the bath is very high tensioned, and it keeps the reader guessing. Very suspenseful.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your driving me crazy.This story is great, please update soon.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"We can continue our conversation in a more… intimate environment, then. So, until next time, *Tokio*-san.”
An excellent line. Trust Saitoh to turn a disadvantage into an advantage.
An excellent line. Trust Saitoh to turn a disadvantage into an advantage.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Saitoh understood now why they had insisted that he and some of the other captains took part into the upcoming festivities. And he didn’t bother it anymore: it would be no wasted time. It would be hunting.\"
I can almost imagine the light in his eyes... delightful. I mean, it\'s so rare to ind people who could write the characters exactly as they are in the manga... I find offensive that people think that the rule should be OOCness and not ICness. If they want to vent their stress and bend the characters to their plot (and not the other way around) they should create their own OCs and go to the Originals, leabving the true fanfiction lovers to enjoy the characters AS THEY ARE.
I can almost imagine the light in his eyes... delightful. I mean, it\'s so rare to ind people who could write the characters exactly as they are in the manga... I find offensive that people think that the rule should be OOCness and not ICness. If they want to vent their stress and bend the characters to their plot (and not the other way around) they should create their own OCs and go to the Originals, leabving the true fanfiction lovers to enjoy the characters AS THEY ARE.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something I forgot to mention in the previous chapter: scaaaary psycho! Please, don\'t let the spycho hurt the kittens!!
One of the things I appreaciate about your stories are the care you put in weave intrincate plots. A real treat *bows*
One of the things I appreaciate about your stories are the care you put in weave intrincate plots. A real treat *bows*
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Saitoh shrugged, thinking inwardly that he wouldn’t call the man who would marry the little witch lucky, but irremediably doomed.\"
Poor dear... if he only knew what was hoovering above his head... Mwhahaha... YEAH! Saitou torture!
I detest Michiko absolutely. She is... I don\'t know... but I alays had this despise for people who think they are superior because of their social status. I understand, it\'s quite typical for the age and place, but watching Matsudaira and the other nobles, it makes her less sympathetic.
Also, the way you play with misunderstandings and how they play on each other nerves is great. I love his reactions!
This part is particularly delicious:
\"Wait a second. That wasn’t his bad luck, but hers. He smirked dirtily. They were alone, hidden from the view of the guests, and the reception was extremely noisy. It was probably the moment to have that little word with her…
“Captain Saitoh,” she addressed him, with a hostility not hidden by her sweet tone. “Trying to avoid your duties, hiding in the garden?”
…or better, just to put his hands around her throat and to squeeze it slowly, until she begged and apologized.\"
If only Sano knew years later... Mwahahahaha...
Poor dear... if he only knew what was hoovering above his head... Mwhahaha... YEAH! Saitou torture!
I detest Michiko absolutely. She is... I don\'t know... but I alays had this despise for people who think they are superior because of their social status. I understand, it\'s quite typical for the age and place, but watching Matsudaira and the other nobles, it makes her less sympathetic.
Also, the way you play with misunderstandings and how they play on each other nerves is great. I love his reactions!
This part is particularly delicious:
\"Wait a second. That wasn’t his bad luck, but hers. He smirked dirtily. They were alone, hidden from the view of the guests, and the reception was extremely noisy. It was probably the moment to have that little word with her…
“Captain Saitoh,” she addressed him, with a hostility not hidden by her sweet tone. “Trying to avoid your duties, hiding in the garden?”
…or better, just to put his hands around her throat and to squeeze it slowly, until she begged and apologized.\"
If only Sano knew years later... Mwahahahaha...
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Saitou\'s inner monologue after the \"news\" of his upcoming marriage is delicious.
The scene at the temple, just perfect. The intrigue level, excellent. Did I say I love your fics?
The scene at the temple, just perfect. The intrigue level, excellent. Did I say I love your fics?
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here you go again with a wonderful piece. Of course, I alreday read it complete in the RK Bad Boys Citrus Paradise ML, yet, re-reading you is always a delicious treat. Here my boy is not present (except for a lil\' glimpse/cameo), but this doesn\'t deprive me of the pleasure of seeing the \'sweet\' interactions between Saitou and Tokio. At this point in time, had I not already read the fic before, I\'d be wondering how the heck they ende marrying each other isntead of mutilating one another...
The charriot detail is nothing, dear. I know that for detail obsessed people like us is a big deal, but considering the last things my eyes had been exposed to, such bit of information is nothing to be worried about. I bet 99,99 % of the readers didn\'t notice it even.
The charriot detail is nothing, dear. I know that for detail obsessed people like us is a big deal, but considering the last things my eyes had been exposed to, such bit of information is nothing to be worried about. I bet 99,99 % of the readers didn\'t notice it even.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Her ladyship’s hobbies are ikebana and manslaughter…”
PRICELESS.
I like when she takes him by surprise, she is nothing he could have expected from a high born lady, and that explains a lot later *grins*
Poor Saitou, his dreams to \'be back to normal\' has been twarted. The poor guy surely will be tied up to stay with the shrew and the airheads...
PRICELESS.
I like when she takes him by surprise, she is nothing he could have expected from a high born lady, and that explains a lot later *grins*
Poor Saitou, his dreams to \'be back to normal\' has been twarted. The poor guy surely will be tied up to stay with the shrew and the airheads...
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"...Saitoh didn\'t pay attention to women: he paid in yen.\"
Oh, my, sooooo Saitou!
Hehe, I like how Okiat is enjoying Saitou\'s unbalance concerning Tokio. I mean, he is quick to figure people out, yet with her he seems at loss, right?
And, yes, she has a problem with authority. Or better said, with those she thinks are not worth of authority. It seems that the unbalance goes both ways here... both have already made their judgments... we\'ll see how it develops afterwards....
Oh, my, sooooo Saitou!
Hehe, I like how Okiat is enjoying Saitou\'s unbalance concerning Tokio. I mean, he is quick to figure people out, yet with her he seems at loss, right?
And, yes, she has a problem with authority. Or better said, with those she thinks are not worth of authority. It seems that the unbalance goes both ways here... both have already made their judgments... we\'ll see how it develops afterwards....