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That, my dear, was so. Incredibly hot, I was like. Whoa. Uh. Kay. I have nothing to say, besides the fact that I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AGRAHRAGHRHAGRHAGRHG.

Oh jesus christ help me, WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING AWESOME?! XD The whole.. dick things, with them smoking and.. stuff, man, I was listening to music, right? And when I read that, I paused the music to CRACK THE FUCK UP. I paused it, turned my spinny chair and laughed, falling off and my dog jumped on me thinking I wanted to play. I DIED.


Otherwise, that wassoeffinghot. Like wowowowowowow. Kyayayayayaksdamdkajldkjf. I don't have any words for that. Is there another word for hot? HOOOOOOOT. LIKE. HHOOOOOOOOOOTTTttttt......aaaaahhdfasdjk. Mm. I.. I forgot what I was going to say. All I know that it was a praise for you, because you are my new God. XD I truly love you, you know that?

You completely made my day with this. XD I dunno why, but I feel like reviewing again. You are just so fucking awesome. XD Thought I had to let you know that. You portrayed the characters so fucking hilariously, I died.

This part: Getting the pants undone, he bucked his lap harder, allowing Ryuichi to bounce his way further and further out of his pants. Ryuichi laughed with delight (a sound that made Tatsuha smile through his sweat) then, free of his pants, went to work on his underwear.


I found that.. one of the cutest things in my LIFE. I litterally went "...Aaawwhh! How fucking sexy!" and my sister was all "The fuck?". XD Had to let you know, I thought that was fucking cute. ... ... Yeah.



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Oh. My. GOD. I. DIED. SOOOOO MUCH reading this, you would never understand. I fucking love it. XD I LOVE IT. It's so fucking HILARIOUS how you make their dicks talk man, that's so priceless. XDDDDD Holy.. fucking crap. I want to sleep sooo bad, my back hurts, but I can't. I HAVE to keep reading. XD Man oh man, this is.. sooooo awesome. Poor Shuichi! Poor Ryu! They just want some lovin'! <3

That was the best story I've read in a long time. It immediately grabbed me with the quick action and the dialogue--I LOVED the dialogue: quick and witty and so very charming. You've got Yuki caustic wit down pat. :P And Ryu's little child bit, and then the adult bit. And Shuuichi's cute whining. It was the whole 'cheese' thing that had tears pouring down my face, I had to stop more than few times to wipe the tears off my face and continue reading. It was hilarious.

I've only just gotten in Gravitation, only see the eps and OAVs and read NONE of the manga so i don't know what's canon and what's your creation, but the whole thing merged so well. I really enjoyed this. :D

this is really THE BEST!!!!!! i laughed my ass off. god those jokes were killers! and the sex scenes,, woohoo!! :D really great. congrats!

OMG This has got to be the best story I have ever read! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!

Wow....wow.....wow.....I've never had to laugh so loud in my life...........This is a good one....you've potray everyone's character the way i dream they would be....One of the best i've read so far....I can't believe the whole group is still bumping uglys in my mind....Well ...Guess ...i won't be able to sleep tonight......Job well done......

Regards,
SoumaNina

This is the funniest fic I have every every every read. I loved it so much it wasGREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love this, and i laughed my ass off totallyand completely. Thank You so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

*tries to breath, wiping away the tears* I haven't laughed that much reading ANYTHING in a LONG time. You have totally captured the purpose behind Gravitation - the humor. You've writen something that rivals some of Murakami's most bizarre situations, and pulled it off without a hitch! Between the musical talent of genetalia and the amazing dialogue you had me in stitches. A brilliant job!

I loved the end credits - again brilliant!

~Su