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for The Bet

by Rhonda

person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That...was the FUNNIEST Gravitation fic I have read in a long time! The part when Yuki was typing and Shuichi was licking the lollipop...priceless! And the parts when Yuki's dick and ego were battling...HAHAHAHAH!!! I expecially LOVE the end credits!!! Are you on gurabiteshion.net? If not, yu should be! This fic, and any other Gravitation ones you write should be there, as other Gravitation fans should have the pleasure of reading your hilarious writings!

Hope to see you there, and KEEP WRITING, ONEGAI!!!

EIRI-CHICK
(-_-)=~
aka
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o';'o)
person angelofdeath47
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, that was so fucking hilarious!!!!! Through the entire thing, I was almost peeing my pants. I felt so sorry for them. You actually feel that ache that they must've felt. To pass up such good catch.
"Oops... I think I broke him." He's so adorable! I love Ryuichi! He's so cute, I just get all wound up when I see him. I'm a sucker for cute things. All my defenses go down when I see or hear the cutest thing. His lines have got to be the best, just so adorable and innocent, it's got to be a crime. Tatsuha's just a very big kid, and they make the perfect match.
Well, that was a very entertaining and amazing story. Certainly had me laughing through the entire length of it. I'll be looking to see if you write anything else.
- S.B.
person Hillary (Oakie)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you how much I love this story, and Hiro Breaks it Down, and the Rules of Engagement! You are by far my favorite shounen-ai/yaoi author ever!! Keep up the incredible work!! I hope to see a rather lengthy and detailed story about K and Hiro!! And don\'t you dare worry about long chapters!! I want something to READ not just skim through. Details are key, and yours are wonderful. Have a great Thanksgiving, if you celebrate it that is. KEEP WRITING!!! Feel free to drop me a line. :)
person Hillary (Oakie)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, me again. I have to know. What is by the can opener?
person Danjana
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is sooooo freakin\' hilarious!!! Tatsuha had me in hysterics laughing while I was reading chapter two. I HAVE to make sure that I read everything you\'ve written, this is one of the funniest stories I\'ve read in a long time.

KUDOS!!!!
person imayb1
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is one of the absolute funniest Gravi stories I\'ve read in a long time. There were so many elements that I wouldn\'t have thought would work (like thought bubbles everyone else can see)-- and yet, the way you\'ve written them, they DO work. You are a talented writer. The story was just wonderful. Thank you for writing and sharing it. :D
person natasha
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your great story kept me laughing
person sesshomaruslover132
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the best stories i\'ve ever read! I loved it!
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS F***ING GREAT!!!! There simply is no other way to say it. Again I bow to your greatness! The talking dicks had to be the best and funniest part! Tho the snapshots at the end are my favorite parts of your writing style, the talking dicks win the award for best characters!! :D Loved it, loved it, loved it!!! Dear Lord I nearly passed out during the last chapter with all the bishies in the bed getting busy together!!! *falls again into drooling fangirl stupor* Please write more! Maybe this time something involving K and Hiro!! Yay-ah!
You\'re the best!! *glomp*
Koneko
person Luciology
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A most entertaining tale full of wit that certainly had me laughing out loud. Favourite moments were: Tatsuha sorting through his \'sex\' music - I haven\'t heard of Kenny Loggins in years, the naked tag sequence and Tatsuha\'s dick\'s battle strategies. :)

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