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by Rhonda

person jarm
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done, but what about Naked Spanking Sunday:)
person PatoSan
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, a friend of mine recommended this story to me and, after not reading any Gravi for months, I decided to give it a try. I\'m so gald that I did! I\'m now listening to Pink and reminescing over the great images your fic concocted in my brain. This fic was probably the funniest thing I\'ve read in a long time. I congratulate you, it was hilarious. It was also very hot at the end.

This is the first time I read a fic with those two couples together on a bed, and I enjoyed it a lot more than I thought I would. Big kudos to you for the whole fic.
person Crimson
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pure genius. That end, I mean...damn. Something about Shuuichi and Ryuuichi kissing at the climax (pun fully intended) really finished it well for me. I loved every minute, laughed so hard, and just...oh, must put this with my faves. So good. Be proud. Humor AND good sex. You go!
person Deity
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an amzing story......absolutely amazing. I loved it, I can even begin to describe how over-joyed I am that you wrote it..................Keep up the excellent work, and well. Write to you some other time.............................
person caliadragon@gmail.com
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was sexy and hilarious! Two exquisit combinations. I love the way that you write and I am off to read more.


Thanks
Calia
person YaoiBunny
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
may I have the privalege to say that was absolutely hot....I have never enjoyed a fic of this calibur as I have enjoyed this one
person bakayaroOnna
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most hilarious pieces I have ever read!

The personalities of the penises and ego, the penis singing \'nobody knows the trouble I\'ve seen\', the sex-starved brothers, the sex-starved lovers, all the interactions and silliness - just priceless!
person evilqueen13
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet you never lose when it comes to talking smack! \"like a drag queen at a shoe sale\". HA! I love the interplay between the brothers and their dicks. I can\'t stop laughing! Pure fucking geniusness (if that\'s even a word) Man that\'s the shit!

*dies from laughter*
person Ashcat
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this was another cute and hillarious fic! I\'m so glad you posted it! I hope you continue to write gravitation stories!
person Eiri Yuki
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, it was great. Very dramatic, I love Yuki and Shuichi they are my favorite couple. But I also like Ryu and Tatusha. I love the way you combined the four of them at the end together in the bed. It was definately my favorite part. If you make another story like this about the four of them let me know.

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