rate_review Reviews

I really, really wanted to like this story. That is to say I did for it\'s concept and the images it created, but I found your prose difficult to follow at times. And there was one little matter that bothered me: Okay, they\'re having sex. Great, brilliant. Lord knows, if I were Integra I\'d be taking liberties of Alucard every spare minute of the day. But isn\'t it so that only virgins can be turned? If Alucard wants to turn Integra one day, why the hell would he be engaging in such pass times? Other than those little issues, I found that the story was good. Might I suggest getting a beta?

thats it. im a fangirl for your AxI even though the format was still a bit rough, it was still just as good. quite plausable if Integra wasn\'t such a frigid bitch to him all the time. But I still like her, and will be Cosplaying her in the near future :D Keep up the writings, you\'re excellent

That was truly awesome and oh so sexy. I can\'t wait to read more... there will be more... right?

Loved the game of words it was extremely clever. Overall great job the characterizations really worked for this story. Keep up the good work.

Nice...very hot. I\'m not familiar with the game \'Question and Answer\', so I was a bit confused at times, but nonetheless, very well done. ^^ *fans self*

Thank you for the new formating (adultfanfiction screwed mine too but I am lazy to repost and struggle with the system. I never thought ff.net was a blessing in that sense). Witty and quite tasteful, I love the style and the dialogue. I will include this story when I rec good fics for the AxI manifesto in lj (check: ship_manifesto during week, I am sir_hellsing in lj).