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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally something to show up in the Onegai Teacher section! I liked most of the story but I think you rushed the first scene a little too much, with Koishi just coming in and practically having her way with Matagu right then and there. You could have given the scene more depth but I still liked it anyway! I hope to see this fic updated, whether soon or later makes no difference. Awesome job!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. Hurry with the nex chapter.