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AAAHHHHH... why... why did he leave?! Ok... I know he loved her, but seriously, how come we couldn't just leave them together and have them happy and what not! What an excellent story though! I'm hella depressed now... but oh the torure... how I enjoy it! Well done...

Ok that was weird, hated how he went to Integra, but I loved it anyway. She is awesome and the date with Alucard is soo romantic!!! I am spoiled for the rest of my life.

This Fanfiction is absolutely amazing.
I must admit that I'm not that much into fanfiction, mainly because they usually don't match my own vision of the characters and feelings, but I read enough hellsing fanfiction to say that this one of yours is the best one.
In one day I read it all, all 28 chapters, and at the and I was almost crying. No, I really cried. Maybe it's just because Ari reflected my own spirit and the relationship between her and Alucard reflects the one between me and my boyfriend, or maybe just because I'm too emotional at times.
I would be a liar to say I liked the end.
I truly wanted the two of them to be togheter, I wanted Integra to simply vanish and...I don't know...
Anyway, even if the end is not happy as I wanted it to be, I must admit that it doesn't make you feel *that* bad...after all the sweet writing Alucard gives Ari made me feel peaceful, like if there could be another chance for them, like if he really loved her more than Integra, at least in one way.
That's it, that's my review, a little screwed up because I'm a little drunk, I'm sleepy and writing something in a language that is not mine in this condition is not really getting me to explain everything I wanted to.
As I already said, this is the best Hellsing fanfiction I've ever read.
Thank you so much for sharing your imagination and your writing skills.

I love your story so much, Im probably going to read it again, as a bed time story or something I love that its a humorous romantic story and not just really dramatic cheesy romantic like most :D

Ok This is my second time, yes second time reading your story because I reaaaally like it and I know that authors like to get reviews so here it is :D I love the Sexy humor

Fantastic storytelling skills. I was very impressed with your talent, especially with some of the things you attributed to Alucard. The concept of feelings being false, along with time, is something that few can accept or even understand. Perhaps you may not believe that you share these beliefs (many fanfiction authors whose work I have reviewed have claimed that they do no share the opinions of their characters) but I have found it all but impossible to prevent one\'s own beliefs from seeping into one\'s writing. For example, the bit where Ari is arguing with Clay that the real monsters are the humans who deliberately harm each other needlessly, not the vampires who bleed us for sustenance. The idea of relative freedom, of relative power... I am very impressed with your open-mindedness.
On a different note... do you have a boyfriend? If not, I would like very much to meet the female who can compose a story so beasutifully. I\'ll even dye my hair and wear a red fedora to make you happy.
Hahahahahahahaha! (No, seriously, I would. Come to think of it... black hair, yellow glasses and a red hat might be a good look for me) I really like how Alucard is portrayed in the manga (I can\'t make heads or tails of the dialogue in the subtitled anime). and in some ways I think that your depiction of Alucard is accurate, as far as my experience with vampires goes.
Fantastic story!

* sniffs *

I can\'t believe its over! This was a wonderful Hellsing fanfiction. Its sad to see it end and the way it ended. I was kinda wishing it was otherwise. They would have made an interesting couple together. Ah well...Either way it was an awesome story. Much luck in future endeavors! Until next time! ^_^

PS Let me know if you do anymore Hellsing fan fics! ^_^ I\'m always on the lookout for a great story to get absorbed in! And it would be a true pleasure to read yours! ^_^

*applause* Absolutely wonderful. I\'ve read the entire thing more than three times now, and I like it better each time. No one has ever addressed the idea of vampiric love in such a manner in fanfiction, and I am grateful to see a better caliber of writers now. I adored the ending, found it perfectly in tune with the rest of the story, in fact. ^_^ And the bits of AxI in the tale just endeared it to me further. Delightful, well written and coherent...I would place this on my shelf gladly.

Bravo!!
That was a damn good story.
Thanks for intertaining me and making me laugh.
Yeah, I\'m a sucker for teary endings too.
*Hats off and lots of cheering*

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. I am in love with story and I cannot wait to see what happens next. Please add, soon.

Crystal