rate_review Reviews

AHAHAHAHA!! Definately my favorite chapter of all. xD Good job,this was the highlight of my night. :D Nooooo,it\'s gonna be over?! Don\'t end it! You must write more,MORE!!!!

Excellent. One of the failings of many fanfic authors is their inability to properly think through their characters before attempting to create a story longer than 5000 words. This usually leads to serious plot holes and OOC within the story. Thankfully, your story does not contain this error, and since I did read the whole thing, I am quite thankful for that. Excellent writing style and detail.

Good, good good good, 10/10 10/10

I really love this fic, it would be a shame to end it, seriusly its some Unwritten rule thes thou shalt not end this Fic.

[has coronary due to laughter]

VAMPIRE BABIES!!!............. God I love this.

BWAHAHAHA! She\'s gonna have his babies! WOOHOO! *giggles insainly* And I could just see the look on Alucard\'s face.. that half \'oh this is getting SOOOO amusing, let\'s egg it on\' grin of his, getting wider and wider, and he\'s likely down in his room ROARING about now making Integra wonder what got him so amused now.
Wonderful chappie! Let me know when you update!

Kami this is good! I just stumbled across this fic and I love it! Took me all day to catch up but its been worth every minute! I just can\'t wait for the next chapter!! And its about time that Officer put Clay in his place! And boy was it good! Damn near took his finger off! That would have been awesome. Not to mention he would have deserved it! The bastard. Anyhoo..I can\'t wait to find out Officer\'s name. Its driving me crazy!!! >.< I can\'t wait til the next update! This ssssooooooo awesome!!!! Until next time!! ^_^

DO we even have to say it? MORE,10/10, Awesome, can\'t wait till the nexst chapter

LMAO. Oh this gets better and better. XD Let Brendon interrupt the end of their little game and see what happens. XD Brendon irritates mee...>< But oh well.^^ Keep up the excellent work!I\'m still checking every day!

Hey, I just found this story and read it from first chapter to now and about to die laughing. I love it. She\'s as crazy as the vampire! No wonder he likes her.. for that alone.. LOL!
ANYWAY..

When you update tell me please?

I read one chapter. Then I had to go to the beginning and read it all. Absolutely wonderful! I\'m perfectly willing to suspend belief in what is commonly considered to be Alucard\'s \'accepted characteristics\' to thoroughly enjoy this story. Your original character is a delight to follow, and Alucard\'s taking on considerable depth. I\'m very intrigued by the game he and Integra seem to be playing with each other. Certainly being caught kissing her monster must have been a shock for the Iron Maiden. This is the only non-AxI story I\'ve found myself enjoying thus far. (Although some hints of AxI pop up; perhaps just my wistful thinking?) The only recommendation I could make is to clarify who is speaking a bit. At times, it becomes mildly confusing. Use speaker actions to mark what quotation goes to whom. I will VERY much continue to read this.