rate_review Reviews

Been following the story ever since you were at the second chapter, really, I can\'t detect any OC-ness at all (as far as it gets for these situations, and Alucards fancy clothings remind me of the manga where he had gone to Rico). Can\'t wait to see the outcome.

9/10 editing (A short jump from the Wall to the club, but for the rest OK)
10/10 storyline
10/10 Content (man Alucards explaination of the human Mind, Very good)

1/1 bonus Alucard With Etiquétes

Overall 9.9/10 \"Almost flawless\"

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Can\'t hardly wait for the rest ;-)

*decides she is coming to AFF.net whenever she gets an update e-mail from fanfiction.net* BTW, I\'m known as RabidFangirl here.

omg, this fic is sooooo good! i just read the whole thing without a stopping! Yes, it is that good! lol.

/sits back in chair/
Damn that was… Damn.
/looks at Su J/
Damn!
/looks at monitor/
Damn! The mirror thing… Damn!
/smirks maliciously/
Have to try that one!!! Muhahahahaha!!!!
/coughs/

well, you know that I love it don’t ya? Don’t stop EVER!

Kiss Kiss
Cleopatra Kat

I like *purr*.

I would have got mine up last night, but my daughter kept coming in the room \"to talk\". You can\'t write an NC-17 novella with a fourteen year old trying to read every damned word over your shoulder. And the kid swears she\'s not even thinking about it. Gah. Children lie almost as much as...*cackles*. I do have some sense left.

Anyway, very nice.

~Bri

Seeing that last chapter in my mind\'s eye makes me want to fall over and die of happiness. I wish Alucard was real. If I wasn\'t gnostic, I\'d pray for that morning, noon, and night. You\'re doing a great job. and guess what... I DON\'T LIKE COOKIES!!! well, not storebought ones anyway...

I freakin llllllllllllllllluuuuuuuuuuvvv your story ... keep writting!

Wow.I really love this story.^^ Everyone is very in character for the most part and your writing style is very nice. I can\'t wait to see more! Nameless girl could really use a name..^^; can\'t wait til she gets one. Great work and keep it up!!!

lol! Nice chapter as always!!!! Hehhehehehehe Alucard\'s going on a date!!!!! Muahahaa!

/Waves a jar of cookies in from of SuckUBusJ/
You know what this is don\'t you??? COOKKIES FOR YOU!!!! Made them myself! /smiles like a maniac/ I will do a more detailed review on FF.Net ok? Especially that yummy yummy /drools/ yyuuuuummmmyyyy description of Alucard. /Her eyes stare into nothing in particular, more drool coming out the corner of her mouth, until a colleage from work hits her in the back of her head/
/Cof Cof/
Hey, everybody needs support! And as a non-English speaker, I know how hard it is to write in English sometimes. And I think your OC rocks! And I want to eat Alucard.
/looks at monitor/
Crap, I wasn\'t supposed to say that... But whatever. HUHAHAHAHHAAH!!!

Kiss Kiss

Cleopatra Kat