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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved your story, must admit i cried :(
poor yohji
poor yohji
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Such vivid descriptions and a tight, uncluttered story flow - I loved every bit of it.
So much feeling, without the sap trap into which most folk seem to fall.
Thank you.
Aabunai
P.S. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my writing.
So much feeling, without the sap trap into which most folk seem to fall.
Thank you.
Aabunai
P.S. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my writing.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only RARELY been moved to tears by a fan fic, and this one tugged at my heartstrings. Very beautifully written and well thought out, the characters were very believable in motivations and actions. I hope to see more of this from you. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this this is so intreging. I can\'t wait to see how your going to have Yohji-kun win back Aya-kun. But that was so sad poor Yohji But I could see him doing something like this for Aya so he could be happy. Well once again good job and please update soon. Saraba.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That broke my heart. Poor Yohji. That\'s so typical oft the powers that be. Give you what you want, but only at a great sacrifice. I know I\'d have done the same thing, but I think I\'d come undone afterwards. Sweet story.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is ridiculous, I\'m bawling all over my keyboard. I love this fic, I think spacing between the paragraphs would have been good though. Anyway, I dont know what exactly made me like this fic so much. Its probably the whole concept of the going back and changing things. I love the description of the situation Yohji was in. I just... just... just Love it. :D Awesome work.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad! I cried! Love it anyway :)!