rate_review Reviews

weeeeeeell that was kinna unfulfilling....

Wow...it ended rather abruptly, don\'t you think? I mean, chapter 17 was him basically proposing to her, then in chapter 18 they were married with children and it was over. You skipped a lot of detail.

But I do like the story, mostly.

his father is such a jerkface! also, i noticed in regards to \"kenshin\" and his sister\'s name \"hiromi\", in the case of the former, it\'s japenese, and the latter at least sounds japenese, so how come the father\'s name is \"eric\"?

oooooohh, wonderful cliffhanger.

HA! I cheated and found the rest of this fic on FF.NEt I can only hope that the reason you are posting on here is that someone answered your challenge and wrote some lemmony goodness for your story OR perhaps that you wrote some lemmony goodness! I did enjoy your fic by the way. Some of the chapters were a bit short for my tastes but its often quality of quantity that I really adore! Thankyou for this odd ball of a story that I never thought I could read and enjoy! I hope you find the time to continue writting!! I love Rurouni Kenshin and thankyou for the AU on my favorite couple!!

~*Toodles*~

ooh, haha, t3h awesome. you\'re writing this fic on this site too? :D well, despite being a rabid k/k fan, i\'d always been interested in this story [since in the end, it is somewhat k/k. oh by the way, this formerly \'mz.amber eyes\' or \'lookmomitzacow\' on aim. yeah, i thought that it was finally about time i got off my lazy ass and changed the names]. anyways, a lot more people are understanding at this site, save for the few that shouldn\'t be reading this site\'s content, AT ALL. so if you come by a flame like at FF. ignore it. continue posting, i\'ll be looking to see if the story has improved. IM me when you update it, yah? alritey. [aim: bi0nne]

what what what?! what happened to kenshin?! kaoru\'s right, you\'re to good for him kenshin!

hmm... So Jean seems to be a real asshole ^_^ OR is he going to try and cover it up saying it was all about his self image? A show to keep people from suspecting? ...But still whats with the face of discust? Has he decided that he doesn\'t love Kenshin anymore and was just using him for his wealth?....MORE PLEASE!!

I admit I\'m not particularly fond of homosexuality, But you did warn me ^_^ and I did notice in you summary it says M/F? I have a rather good grasp of Kenshin and Kaoru\'s character :P but If he is so pertenant to the story perhaps a bit more about Jean? His look reminds me of Sanosuke...but I don\'t know whether I like him or not I dont feel that I have enought information about him. This is only the begginning I suppose, Hope to see more from you soon! I look forward to reading more!!

im not really into homosexuals but this story is kinna interesting will you please email me when you have the next chapter? and please put the title so i wont delete it ...well see ya