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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait for you to update. I keep coming back and checking in but sadly it hasn't been up dated for awhile. I like how your charactors are so origianl yet stick with the same kind of pattern that the real Hellsing has. I hope that you up date again soon.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! your OCs are real and very inventive. and the story so far has been intreiguing without seeming bogged down in details. i hope you continue it soon.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story
Update Soon
Update Soon
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read through the fic, right up to A Plan Gone Awry; I have to admit, it\'s a pretty good fic on the whole. There are a few occasional bouts of out-of-characterishness; Not to mention the fact that you seem to have set Pip/Seras aside; given that it\'s a wholly canon pairing, it might be a good idea to put a little bit of the captain of the Wild Geese lovin\' on Seras in there. But yeah, it\'s a pretty good fanfic, for the most part.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... good, i like that u r consistent with making Dierdre smart in every way even when men come along... most OC\'s tend to be kind of weak in this department but this is a good change.
She seems to have a bit more balanced personality than Integra which i like a lot. More human... Integra sometimes seems more inhuman than her vampires.
Yayyyy we r getting close to plot sweetnessss!!!!
Great work!!!
+kissu+
Su J.
ps: me luvs Marcus
She seems to have a bit more balanced personality than Integra which i like a lot. More human... Integra sometimes seems more inhuman than her vampires.
Yayyyy we r getting close to plot sweetnessss!!!!
Great work!!!
+kissu+
Su J.
ps: me luvs Marcus
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow
Dan does know his military stuff huh?? was it you or him?? i know u were in th emilitary too, let me know.
Great chappy, i really like the detail and the info and how polished it is. little typos and tense switches but i enjoyed it veyr vyer veyr much!!!
GREAT JOB DAN!!! SEE I FINALLY DID READ IT BEFORE NOON!! hehe
Dan does know his military stuff huh?? was it you or him?? i know u were in th emilitary too, let me know.
Great chappy, i really like the detail and the info and how polished it is. little typos and tense switches but i enjoyed it veyr vyer veyr much!!!
GREAT JOB DAN!!! SEE I FINALLY DID READ IT BEFORE NOON!! hehe
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYYY NEW CHAPPY!
u know i like Marcus a lot... and Dier seems to like him too... go girl, shes so lucky with her little experience...
can\'t wait to see what the plan is... integra\'s plan... will finally ALucard get some luv? c\'mon let him get some, he\'s been a good boy and looks very celibate to me...
UPDATE SOON!
kisses and reeses
Su J.
u know i like Marcus a lot... and Dier seems to like him too... go girl, shes so lucky with her little experience...
can\'t wait to see what the plan is... integra\'s plan... will finally ALucard get some luv? c\'mon let him get some, he\'s been a good boy and looks very celibate to me...
UPDATE SOON!
kisses and reeses
Su J.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so she scored against alucard.
very impressive.
please continue.
very impressive.
please continue.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU TEASEEEEEE!!!
i wonder what will happen... Marcus sounds awesome and i wonder how Dier will see him... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
i loevd your word choice and description as i told you... i know the part of Dier \'checking the balance of the sword\' very well... my ceiling fan has been through hell because of that :D
+hugs+
Su J.
i wonder what will happen... Marcus sounds awesome and i wonder how Dier will see him... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
i loevd your word choice and description as i told you... i know the part of Dier \'checking the balance of the sword\' very well... my ceiling fan has been through hell because of that :D
+hugs+
Su J.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOORRAAYYY FOR PWP!!!
loved it!! well that\'s a twist i didn\'t see coming... i love to be surprised! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL ... DO A VERY VERY VERY... FAST CARTWHEEL...
+morning Cartwhell+
sorry it was requested...
:D
sorry it\'s too easrly... bai!
loved it!! well that\'s a twist i didn\'t see coming... i love to be surprised! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL ... DO A VERY VERY VERY... FAST CARTWHEEL...
+morning Cartwhell+
sorry it was requested...
:D
sorry it\'s too easrly... bai!