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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I'm off to read the next one now.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, love the title. Hana-kimi has enough sexual tension to cut with a knife, so it's good to have something finally happen even if it's not in the actual series. I like Nakatsu's reaction.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a first lemon! You got the charaters right on and how M & S first time would probably be. I'm as big a fan of it as yourself.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! I love the last Nakatsu line. \"I\"M NOT GAY!\" he\'s so happy. lol
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh that was really good! especially for your first and for one of the first Hana-kimi fanfics here! i loved it! you should definetly write more! more more!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how come you didn\'t post this on ff.net? it\'s good.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell year i\'ve been waiting for one of those.............
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG teh cuteness!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really really cute! I enjoyed reading your fanfic a lot :) You have a great writing style, keep it up!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done first lemon! Cute situation, cute characters... we all love them. How funny... nice short story, but remember that detail is your friend! Cute cute cute story. Kudos!