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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! i loved the ending and the bonus chapter is pretty hot
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great story. It\'s so hard to find a good story with this pairing. I loved it.
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAy Its over, ende, finito... I loved the ending (like the whole story) very much. And the idea Bodyguard!Xel is just hilarous.
*whisper*: maybe a sequel, or another X/Z fic? (Yeah, IM greed)
Once more Thanks for the story
keera
*whisper*: maybe a sequel, or another X/Z fic? (Yeah, IM greed)
Once more Thanks for the story
keera
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*remembers to breathe again*
oh my god, you are AMAZING!!!!
seriously, when I finished reading ch 12 I was like \"Whoa....\"
I think I need to build a temple for you or something.
...
but you won\'t let Zel die, will you?!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
oh my god, you are AMAZING!!!!
seriously, when I finished reading ch 12 I was like \"Whoa....\"
I think I need to build a temple for you or something.
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but you won\'t let Zel die, will you?!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah. Damn, did Xelloss really have to go with him? ; ;. Nooo. Yeah, havent gotten online in a while. But chapter 10 was a great lemon hehe^^. But damn ._. don\'t die Xelloss, you can\'t! I knew from the start Xelloss was just trying to make him angry there. But it was still kinda shocking at first to hear him say all that. to Zelgadis. Anyways, cant wait to see what happens next ::panic::.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor boys... ...
Your fic is so amazing, that i could bear with a non-happy-ending (please don\'t ... or yes?) Whatever, if the next chapter may be the last, I know that would be perfectly fit with the whole story.
[sorry for my terrible english]
Your fic is so amazing, that i could bear with a non-happy-ending (please don\'t ... or yes?) Whatever, if the next chapter may be the last, I know that would be perfectly fit with the whole story.
[sorry for my terrible english]
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is the best slayers fanfic i have EVER read. You absolutely have to continue this, i just cant stop thinking about it! Please add chapter 12 soon!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooo good! I loved it from the beginning, and now I\'m hanging on every word. It has to be one of the best pieces of fanfiction I\'ve ever read!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked all versions of ch 10 almost equally, but i gotta say that every edit makes it better.
but come on, STOP TEASING!!!!!
i\'m DYING to know what happens next!
but come on, STOP TEASING!!!!!
i\'m DYING to know what happens next!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, thanks. I read the previous version of chapter 10 too, but this is really better, you were right to change it. Both guys are better in character.
\"I\'m supposed to be the one to ask if I hurt you, aren\'t I?_Zelgadis snorted. \"If you ask that, I\'ll be very worried about you!\" How true.:)
I\'m really courious what will be in the Shrine.
\"I\'m supposed to be the one to ask if I hurt you, aren\'t I?_Zelgadis snorted. \"If you ask that, I\'ll be very worried about you!\" How true.:)
I\'m really courious what will be in the Shrine.