rate_review Reviews

I can't wiat for the ending! This is going to be good! ;D For what it's worth, I think Negi should get with either Nodoka or Yue. if not those two then Makie.

Nodoka, I definately like the quiet/shy ones. They are the ones that can bloom and change the fate of the world, when propberly guided.
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i like this fic. please don't discontinue.... ot wait as long as you did. i like the update. my vote (not like it'll matter) is Yue. leave me alone. me likes the non-cannon. can't wait for next update, later!

Glad to see that you are back, at the very least for this one.

If I had to pick it would be Nodoka or Makie. Sorry can't pick among those two.

Hope you update this one soon.

Nodoka! Nodoka! Nodoka!!!

Something about shy girls get to me... dunno why...

Good to see that you are back, even if you dont do a new chapter, i thank you for this one, my vote is for Asuna.

I\'m saying this only to help you out.
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I WILL KILL U

Entertaining, but could be much better written. Characters appear too suddenly, like Chizuru. We don\'t even know what\'s her position.

Need sex, need sex, need sex, need sex, need sex, and what else? Oh yeah, sex! Mwahahahaha! Will Asuna rape Negi? That will be so evil! Mwahahahahaha! Anyway nice little chapter.