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I remembered this anime from long ago, and this is the first story I've read of it. I like this. I'm getting into it because you're careful with the characters. You're mindful of their personalities and lives. Beta or not, it's good, and I'll be reading more in the future. ^_^

Fweee! This was really good! Nicely structured, original storyline, and I really liked your OCs. Only had one little nit to pick--Ramsey was Kimishima\'s son...but you never really explain that. We know that Ryuma and Kazuhou were clones...but what about Ramsey? I\'m assuming that \'Shima wasn\'t cloned since he wasn\'t an Alter...but I\'d still have liked to see something of an explanation as to where the heck his son came from. That was it, though--other than that, I thought the story rocked! ^_^

That was a great ending... Ryuma came back, kinda.... this was a great fic... and i hope to one day read some of your other fics, once my interests stop jumping from anime to anime... when i\'m like this i have a hard time concentrating on anything that isn\'t based on my obsession.... well in closing... I loved this fic it was a joy to read... keep up the good work

I love!!!!! I love this story! Poor Ryuma. He\'s my baby as much as yours. I thought up the idea. *sobs uncontrollably* I can\'t wait for September. My birthday\'s in September. Hopefully nobody steals my money again this year.

WAH!!.... Ryuma.... *whimpers*... so mean... *sniff*.... big meanie.... *mumbles words that sound like threats*.... though sad this was a good chapter.... I\'ll be sure to watch Naruto when it shows is September... I also wish it was september... cause livin in florida is pretty hot and i\'m having a war with my mom over the air conditioning.... i like it cold she likes it off.... not very nice of her.... well hope you\'ll figure out what to do for the final chap... I think i kinda prefer Epiloges but not by alot.... only by about 5%.... guess you could say i really don\'t care

yo. no more cliffies, damnit!! update or i\'ll rip your bloody head from your shoulders!!

Yay..... you updated swiftly, and i don\'t mind it being a short chap.... cant wait to read the next one.... as for the Naruto pairing you mentioned, i know nothin about em, cause i have yet to watch Naruto..... it\'s on my list of anime\'s I wanna see..... It\'s a really long list.... i add about five new anime\'s for every one i manage to see.... now that i think about it, oh no... now i wanna go on a scavenger hunt for free fansubs to dl..... i don\'t have room on my computer for this.... i must learn how to use my dvd burner, and fast..... I\'m bored and am just tryin to keep myself entertained.... not really working so i guess i\'ll just go.... great chap, cant wait for the update

Yay for the update.... poor Ryuma, has to suffer so much *pouts*... Hope you\'ll update soon.... sory i don\'t have much to say, but my mind is kind of stuck on another anime at the moment

yo, keep it up, this is a bloody good fic, mate!!!

Great chap.... must of hurt a bit when the chip came out his nose..... poor Ryuma is near, though I know he\'ll pull through..... hope you\'ll update soon