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yay... that was another great chapter.... poor Ryuma\'s in so much pain.... and it would seem the chip has been knocked lose from Kazuho\'s head, hehe Ms. Kujou will not be happy when she finds out...... oh it was just great... I can\'t wait to read the next chap

OMG!!!! i absolutly love this fic!!! oh the hilarity, oh the drama, oh the really good fluff..... heh, anyhoo, i suggest you update soon, lest you start loosing appendages *cracks knuckles* now, fool!!!

I\'m glad you updated. It was really good. I have no idea what to say. Me and Zktx can\'t wait for the next one. It\'s good you update often cause im less likely to carry out my threat. But dont worry I wont take your good arm.

HA!! I\'m back! I can\'t believe you wrote THREE chapters while I was gone! I\'m so proud of you. XD

You\'re getting death threats?! Tell them to put a sock in it \'cause you\'re doing great. Few writers update as quickly as you do.

Ah, I like Kazuhou. Though I would like to see his reasoning behind not telling Ryuma his name. Is he really that loyal to Ms. Kusou? LOL! I can\'t wait to see how Ryuhou and Kazuma react to finding out that they have two kids, not just one. But please, don\'t forget to write about Ryuhou and Kazuma\'s relationship. Nothing as serious as a relationship just works itself out in the background, especially when children get involved. So anyway, I\'m back, well for now. I\'ll probably be back to hiding in the shadows for your next couple of chapters.

Keep up the totally awesome work!
~Yasei

That was another splendid chapter.... Ramsey smoking pot kind of fits, and he tried to force himself on poor Ryuma... if he\'d succeded i\'d probably be a little upset, Ryuho to the rescue, hehe.... I can\'t wait to hear more about Kazuho.... anyway, i\'ll be away for almost all of next week so it might be awhile before i can get back on and read..... so update whenever or i\'ll sick that evil monkey from Death\'s review on you.... hehehe, I love the evil monkey

Yay.... you got an update in before i had a chance to leave... *dances*..... Kazuho is turning into quite an interesting character.... i liked his alter too.... and he and Ryuma are starting to bond eventhough they don\'t really know eachother.... well that was a great chapter, can\'t wait to read the next

That was really good. Me and my imaginary friend Zktx (pronounced potato) really injoyed it. Unfortunately if you don\'t update soon we\'ll be forced to hunt you down, rip off your arm, and shove it up your ass. I mean that too *Closet door slams open and evil monkey points and glares* Thanks.

*jumps up and points to screan* I KEW THERE WAS GOING TO BE A KAZUHO!!!..... ooooooh soda.... *sits back down*...anyway, when i first started reading the story i thought to myself \'Ryuma thats a nice play on names, i think i would have gone with Kazuho though, maby there\'ll be a second clone, that would be cool....\' and so on.... great minds truely do think alike.... i wonder what his alter will be like, i have a pretty good idea what it\'ll be like.... i can\'t think of anything else to say..... i just got home so i don\'t have much caffine in my system... i\'m naturally a quiet person and don\'t converse well eithout some form of caffine in my system.... well this was another splendid chapter, hope you\'ll update soon.... and just so ya know, my idea of soon is within 2 weeks

GAH!!! You update so wonderfully fast that I missed your last chapter update! So, I\'m sorry for not review the last chapter. I just started my \"official\" vacation 5 days ago and the likelihood of me catching all of your chapters on time is slim. At least I\'m still getting the chance to read!!

I must say, I believe that you are improving with your writing. You seem to be paying attention to the new scenarios you put the characters through instead of giving them all mind reading powers. ^_^ I\'m very proud of you! And you did a great job with the sex scene. LOL I can just imagine how hard it would be to write those, especially if you don\'t like them. I haven\'t actually written any yet, however, I hear that writing particularly steamy scenes can cure writers block. *snickers*

I love Ramsey\'s alter. The name isn\'t bad either. When creating names I tend to get stuck because I\'m afraid of how stupid they might sound to other people. I loved the Ramsey/Ryuma cuddle scene, very cute. LOL! Nanaka sounds like a great person to go to for writers block, but being reviewers/readers we seem to automatically come up with new ideas for stories we\'re currently reading. ^_~ I know I do, but I try not to make any suggestions lest the author become dependent upon me for ideas. (It\'s kinda happened before. -_-;)

So, there is my review! Nice and long because I can\'t guarantee I\'ll be here to review your next chapter. Either way, I\'m sure I\'ll love it. ^_^ *hugs*

~Yasei

Another wonderfull chapter.... i have to admit, in the chapter where Ramsey was introduced... i seem to have forgotten the little section where they mentioned he had an alter..... every now and then i tend to read without really taking any notice as to what it is i\'m reading.... oh well.... i liked his alter, it was an idea i tought of at one point in time.... great mines think alike... hehe.... also, caffine will not make my head explode onyl the lack of caffine will... when i go thrugh caffine withdrawl I become grouchy and short tempered and am quite likely to say i hate a story and then procede to make up stupid reasons as to why i hate it.... granted once i get past the 3 day point it\'s not so bad.... soda tastes so much better when you haven\'t had any for 3 days.... it\'s like finally finding water when your lost in the desert.... anyway, great chapter i hope you\'ll update soon