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for Benefits of Evolution

by ScyStorm

person just_me
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my ass off at this one. It\'s hot, but for some odd reason I couldn\'t place myself in a Sandslash or Sandshrew.
I just kept seeing human/pokemonhybrids in my mind, which is nuts. The stuff with the murrs and tails are funny.
The story itself reminded me alot of Uchihacest (naruto). Maybe it\'s the fact that the pokemon are brothers that attracted me to read this. Nah, who cares.
Great job.
person blisblop
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok.I thought that was hot.I liked the mrrrs and the thought of a tailbase.I\'m sick,in a good way I hope.Bizzareness,I love bizzareness.Great story,I usually like incest(Uchiha bros from Naruto)but this was so..so..kinda hot, and cute too.
person tenshi
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent, also did you happen to get that idea from a certain site ;P, i wont say the name of it for risk of getting it shutdown... anyways im pretty sure i know what this fic is two, hehe good job in puttiong the pics with the scenes :D, also if this was a literary test sheet paper, you would have scored a 6 by my standards, btw 6 is the highest you can get as a national score :D good job on the grammar ^^ and sentence structuring, its difficult i know hehe anyways AWSOME FIC, WRITE MORE ABOUT MORE PICS.... MAKE ONE WITH A RIKKO ^^ hehe ok well like i said awsome, hope to see more ^^

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